I was so built up in suspense..then humor! I laugh!

hysterical! I love how you write Clark and Bruce

Gotta love that Batman wisdom at the end, haha.

lol, poor Clark. And poor Bruce!

Very funny story- I loved it. I loved the way Clark continuously thought about the way Bruce spoke...Super-duper funny.

The 'Okay' part with Bruce? Definitely my favorite part of this fic...just because of the way I imagine him saying it.

So...thanks for writing it.

Very funny fic. Loved it. :)

Buwah hah haha hah ha!

Brilliant!

She wants to pave Kansas!

*dies laughing*

not sure I've sent you one before, but I've read you mara verse stuff as long as I've been on these fanfiction boards.

In this story...you show that you Really understand the bruce/clark dynamic and REALLY understand man / woman relationship dynamics...

GENERAL: you are consistently interesting, surprizing. I enjoy your characterizations and the way you've projected certain relationships into the future.

Ha-HA lol, you got That right. my dad is like that, he once saw a car with a sticker 'p' (for probation) he sais it was 'perempuan' (translated: woman)

Poor clueless Clark LOL! Too funny!

See, THIS is why Batman's so smart...

Very good story. Quite funny!

Heehee.

See, Clark, just 'cause you're invulnerable doesn't mean your wife isn't dangerous.

How true.

FREAKIN AWESOME! ! I loved it-well written and very witty. :)