There is another Latios that wants the Soul Dew (it's not the soul drip but soul dew) and he is planing on using Jasmine to get either Latias or Latius!


What does he want the soul dew for

Sniff. Poor Latius, she's not a flaw

For everyone who was like.

Isn't Gir a character from that totally awesome show Invader Zim?

Yes, yes it is. The secend best character.

That's why I changed Gir's name to...ATIN!

There, case closed.

It never uploads right when I edit, so just read this and be like. OH. His name is Atin.

(Winces) Harsune, I'm a boy! It's been on my profile goodness knows how long!

I see Kotor got their first, but covered the barebones about X. Darikos is an offshoot of the Latios line, with the name being a combination of Dark and Latios. (Well, technically he's still a Latios, but it's complicated. VERY complicated. I might... will lose a few readers from SitN when I explain it. And look, I was struggling for a name, okay? That's why it's so cheesy.) I've got two links on my profile for pictures, but has broken one of them (rubbish new editor). The only one that's left is Profile -> Media tab -> The Imageshack link with Lateral_Ganon in the words. You'll see X is the red and black Eon there, not the silver Latios amulet next to him. That one's Argent.

But X isn't supposed to be cool! He's an antagonist! People are supposed to hate him! People that know his character from 'The Guardian Father' hate him so much, and want to rip his head off! I mean, his equivalant of my Laura is the devil herself. That Blaziken two reviews ago.

(X- 'ARGH! I GOT TACKLEGLOMPED! Urgh, Uh-' X begins hyperventilating, X-'ah, aah, AA-AA-AA-AA-AARGH!' Runs off to douse himself with Hydrogen Peroxide. X- 'Argh! It stings!') *Sweatdrops* That's the most stupid thing you've ever done. Thank god you're only like this for reviews.

Never Alone! You've seen that AMV! I've got that on Veoh (and this time it doesn't try to delete it every time I'm not looking). I love that one, even if it is a little depressing by starting off with the post Latios-death scenes and going nuts with the black and white effect.

Now onto the chapter itself. It's good. Nice reference to Altoshipping. And it's sweet that Latias's the only one not to have heard of Latius. That sweet naiveity seems to be one of the things that makes her character so beautiful.
And the Librarian is a Latias too? Meh. I've seen weirder.
Just try not to pair the Alto-Latias with anything other than Ash in a sequel, as she's the only one that can make Altoshipping work. And never pair Latias with Rayquaza. Ever. That's just cruelty, and I regularly rant against it. A very easy way to lose favour with me permanently is to make a Dracoshipping.

hmm, nice endi...

A LIBRARY ASSISTANT THAT IS A SHINY LATIAS?

-gets out master ball-

Anyways, I can tell where you got the name Gir from...

Well, I can't wait for anything else you do...

Oh yeah, for the love of Arceus (xP), dont put yo in a fic... I dont really care if it is in the thanks, but dont put it in the fic...

Groudon: Yeah, especially when there is an Earthshipping oneshot comin...

FALCON PAUNCH!

Groudon:Ow...

See you later!

-sigh- all good things must come to an end, i'm afraid.

now, harsune, i'm not saying this got worse. it's just my usual end-of-good-fic depression. it'll probably clear up in an hour or two, it always does, though, so don't worry.

Ganon and x got there first... oh well. oh yes, X is a Darikos, or some form of dark latios. ganon's got a picture on his profile somewhere. where, i dunno, i've gone and forgotten again, but it's there.

as for my advice, it's not a problem. practically my job to pass on the same advice i got when i started writing. at least i don't have to give the paragraph stuff, that was always the most annoying thing to give. but whatever.

a perfectly perfect fight scene for the possible sequel? i shall have to keep an eye open. -disappears into ninetaileddemonIV's (my brother) reviewing room for a moment with a red lightsaber. the words "read", "review", "ask", and "sequel" can be heard, before i come back-

sorry. rating... 9.5/10. nice job.

kotor, out!

PS. I noticed that little bit of Altoshipping in there (at least, methinks it was). welcome aboard!

Cyphrus: SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL!
Cj: (Takes out random baseball bat and starts attacking him)
Cyphrus: WARGH!

Cj: Arch and Gir? Only one Latius? Little hint of Altoshipping? Nice, this story was definately worth going into my favorites.
Cyphrus: Shouldn't you be writing your fic now?
Cj: Oh yea, I forgot.

Cj

Wow! Amazing start! So Latius is Latias' new partner in protectin Alto Mare? That's awesome that Latios told her to watch over Latias.

Damn... twice now that Latias has lost someone she cares.

WA-AA-AA-ARGH! Why is my intuition never wrong! Just for once, I'd like to be wrong! She shouldn't have had to die! Jasmine, because Harsune used the word Sorry again, and because you directly caused Latius's death, I'm setting X on you. Enjoy. (X flies at the human, and starts dicing her slowly to cause as much pain as possible. X- 'Evil, evil, evil git!') Language X! (X- 'What's wrong with git?') It's not harsh enough. (X, smirking- 'Oh! That's a first. Jasmine you're a BLEEP BLEEP BLEEP BLEEP BLEEP!') Maybe too coarse there. (X- 'Who cares? It's Jasmine.') Good point.

One phrase caught my eye. The Lilac Lati. Catchy.

The only consolation is that the lovers are reunited again. Ooh hoo hoo! I've just had another burst of foresight again, and this time it's much more appealing! This is another Soul Dew, so that will have a link to Latius. And if Latius is 'dead', she has a link to Latios, so they can get all cosy in the same Soul Dew. Hopefully not too cosy, because that would just freak people out.

Now Latius's death scene was truly amazing. (X, looking up from the pulp left over from Jasmine- 'Hippocrite...') Shut up, and finish mashing her! I can't think of a better word! The fading heartbeat, the hell-wishers, the silence... I mean wow! That is without a doubt, the most heart-rending death scene I've seen on this entire site. Those daft AAML fans don't know what they're missing here.

Latias has lost too many people clsoe to her. First her parents, then her brother, then Ash (Laura- 'Albeit temporarily.'), and now Latius. The world is too cruel to her.

-sniffle- poor Latias. She has to be all alone again. and it's... jasmine's fault. All her fault. I'll get to that in a minute, though.

aww, Latius finally proved everyone wrong. poor dear... at least she gets to be with latios, now.

i give a 9/10 so far. now... -I go into a long speech sbout how it was unfair that latius had to die, and then a huge column of blue energy surges around me from the clouds.-

Kotor, out! Ka...me...ha...me...HA! -blasts once again-

Twice...Twice Latias lost someone. Man, I feel really bad for her now!

I don't really have anything to say really, your story made me completely speechless!

Cj- you don't have to be a human to be a person.

Damn, I swear I had a lump in my throat after reading this.

I do have a musical suggestion for this chapter: Sadness and Sorrow from Naruto, or possibly Mad World from Gears of War...

Keep going!

Yes! No sorrys in the author notes! X, you're fired- (X- 'What?! You can't fire me!') Let me finish... out of a cannon. (X- 'What the?!' BOOM! X- 'ARGH! STOP TREATING ME LIKE AN OC!' Twinkle.)Dimwit, you are an OC. I'm talking to thin air. OK, I'm nuts.

This is... dang. If I say amazing again, I'll be a hippocrite. Excellent? Close enough.

But Kotor has a point. Regardless of alignment, a Latios is a Latios. Even if it's evil, it should still get a fitting death scene. They are technically noble creatures, although I think it's expanded enough not to be too bad. I mean look at X. (Laura- 'You blasted him off. Harsune would need a telescope.') Well, when he comes back. He's unscrupulously evil, but I still gave him a fair send off despite that. That was because he was technically a Latios. Kotor probably got the most stick for a dodgy death scene, by just typing: 'He was dead', and literally nothing else. Do as you like.

You upload these into the document handler and post them straight up don't you. I can tell from the first sentance being repeated every time. You can edit it further there, including lines across the page which are really helpful in showing a scene change.

Now with the Alto-Latios 'death' scene. That was so tragic, and just simply... perfect. Poor Latius. You've harnessed the Eonshipping pairing brilliantly. (X- 'Heads up!') What the?! (THUD. X- 'I landed in that tribe of Wynaut with the weird trebuchet. They sent me back.' Laura- 'And we thought we got rid of you.' X- 'You can't get rid of me.' Sarah- 'Oh X?' X- 'Meep!' X runs away as the Blaziken walks in. Sarah- 'Have you seen X anywhere?') That way. (X- 'CURSE YOU!') See. Now where was I... oh yeah. About Eonshipping. I just wish there was some way they could be together ag- no. I wouldn't wish that on her. I've just remembered the consequences of a Soul Dew breaking, and it's not good. No no no! I might have just anticipated your next chapter.
Waa-aa-argh!

Why should I make Latios's death all dramatic and good-looking? He's evil. Therefore, he doesn't deserve it.
And some of you seem...sad? That he's dead.
Or maybe you're talking about the good Latios, and how he technically is 'dead' because he no longer has contact to anything that's alive.