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Reviews For: The Fallen Ones
Patricia16
2008-07-02
ch 2, 		abuseplease update
Cameron
2008-05-13
ch 1, anon.		abuseI had such high hopes for this story, but the typos and grammatical errors are too much. What are you trying to say with this sentence "However the through the throbbing of the poison’s". If you fix all the mistakes, the story will be great.
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