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Reviews For: Whenever You Call: Step 1: It Starts

Pyro-Neko-Isis
2008-05-17
ch 1,
abusenice... I like it so far
Maars
2008-04-16
ch 1,
abuseHi!
I like your story so far. I'll read the following steps another time (don't have the time now). Anyway... good chappie. I liked the ending :) very promising. But, if the following steps are linked to this, wouldn't it be easier for readers to have those as chapters after this one? Just a suggestion ~_^
Ja ne!
Maars
katleap
2008-04-03
ch 1,
abuseI love how you describe Duo's smile. Love it! It's just gorgeous. I think you have both Heero and Duo nailed down really well here. Great job!
Angelyn
2008-04-03
ch 1,
abuseEXCELLENT STORY! I loved every word of it. It was like I was there!! Keep writing! ^_^
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