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| Pyro-Neko-Isis 2008-05-17 ch 1, | abusenice... I like it so far |
| Maars 2008-04-16 ch 1, | abuseHi! I like your story so far. I'll read the following steps another time (don't have the time now). Anyway... good chappie. I liked the ending :) very promising. But, if the following steps are linked to this, wouldn't it be easier for readers to have those as chapters after this one? Just a suggestion ~_^ Ja ne! Maars |
| katleap 2008-04-03 ch 1, | abuseI love how you describe Duo's smile. Love it! It's just gorgeous. I think you have both Heero and Duo nailed down really well here. Great job! |
| Angelyn 2008-04-03 ch 1, | abuseEXCELLENT STORY! I loved every word of it. It was like I was there!! Keep writing! ^_^ |