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| JimPamJAM 2008-06-01 ch 1, | abuseNicely done! I love the lines: "The moment I knew At “mixed berry yogurt” I looked into your eyes And knew right away I’d need a disguise." Your poem rhymes and flows perfectly. :) By the way, I love all the titles to these companion fics! |
| Senorita Stokes 2008-04-08 ch 1, | abuseaw, jim :D haha. awesome poem. |
| gnbrules 2008-04-03 ch 1, | abusePoetry! Yes, we need more poetry here. Anyway, I loved it. You did an awesome job at capturing their emotions. :) |
| Sarah 2008-04-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseI love it! It's cute how both Pam and Jim were thinking of "mixed berry yogurt." |