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Reviews For: Blackberry

JimPamJAM
2008-06-01
ch 1,
abuseNicely done! I love the lines:

"The moment I knew
At “mixed berry yogurt”
I looked into your eyes
And knew right away
I’d need a disguise."

Your poem rhymes and flows perfectly. :) By the way, I love all the titles to these companion fics!
Senorita Stokes
2008-04-08
ch 1,
abuseaw, jim :D haha. awesome poem.
gnbrules
2008-04-03
ch 1,
abusePoetry! Yes, we need more poetry here. Anyway, I loved it. You did an awesome job at capturing their emotions. :)
Sarah
2008-04-03
ch 1, anon.
abuseI love it! It's cute how both Pam and Jim were thinking of "mixed berry yogurt."
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