Great chapter! You write Videl very well and I'm interested to see whats going to happen next, keep up the good work

I'm definitely excited for the next chapter. You're note saying that it'll be fun just adds to how anxious I am to read it. This story is great so far; keep it up!

Very good! I am so captivated right now it is not even funny. Update soon. I want to see what happens next!

Wonderful chapter! Although I am really really looking forward to figuring out what happens in May. The toxic skin thing was really cool although a bit unexpected.

SUCH a good chapter. It was interesting to learn more about Seven, and I'm anxious to see more of Gohan and Videl's problems. Update soon!

This story rocks.

Wow, this story's really interesting - Seven's past and purpose is really making me wonder.
Update soon! =D

Wonderful chapter and totally engaging although it took pretty much all the focus I had to read your complex narrative. It always amazes me how you can answer so many questions and create so many questions within the same chapter! Great work I eagerly await more. The 'bandage' passage really interests me

... That was interesting.

A lot to think about, some confusing... but hell, let's wait for the next chapter back in the present.

Wow, that was some pretty heavy stuff. I enjoyed reading about his origin a bit. And maybe this did have some spoilers, but you're right... in no way would it ruin the story. Very tactfully written. Keep up the good work! Of course, I'm looking forward to the next chapter. I'm also interested to see if Gohan and Videl's relationship will improve anytime soon. It's very tragic, and occasionally hits a little too close to home. But I've come to realize that this is not exactly an upbeat happy-go-lucky story, so... I guess I won't be surprised if things don't get better for them.

Oi, Seven... that was a mess. Love how you wrote it, nice and awkward and full of utter unplesantness, but it doesn;t drag you down. It's kind of funny, but not in a AHA way but more ironically. Good stuff. Looking forward to more when ya get it out.

*patpats Gohan on the back and offers him some soup*

Ohh does this mean the mystery of Sevewns origion will be revealed? I hope so!

Wow! I am REALLY enjoying this story. There is a lot of mystery behind Seven, but it was good to have some of it revealed in this chapter.
As does everyone else, I love the way you write Gohan. Even more so, I love the way you describe scenarios and embed metaphors whenever it is proper. Your vocabulary is very good - I've actually had to look a couple words up, and that impresses me as well.
I can't wait for future chapters of this, it's really caught my interest. You are an EXCELLENT writer in my opinion.

Nice... very strange, as always. But good. A little more got revealed and a lot more's still in secret, and I kinda like it that way.

Again, love your Gohan and I've always liked Seven. And it should be interesting to see what happens next here... I'm seeing Videl possibly a bit freaked out. But hell, who knows what'll happen. Possibly you > > The rest of us just have to wait.

Two things first.

One, love of god, you had me scared there for a minute. It sounded like the dead girl was Videl there for a minute o_O I may not be her biggest fan, but for eveybody else's sake it's good that didn't happen.

Two, I knew it was him of course but it's nice to hear the kid's name ^^ I love this char. It'll be interesting to see what other changes there are in store for thing.

I like this fic ^^ I'm not really sure what'll happen > > But I know it'll be good. I like the jumping between the chars, their diffrent perspectives on what's going on. Woot.