Ha, well-written and really clever. I like the way you handled this.

Well, you definitely personified the ship better than I've seen it done before! I had no idea who Simon was operating on until Kaylee spoke up. Wonderful!

Thats a really nice intersting piece. Thought for a moment it was River or something. I really liked the parallel you drew to Serenity being like a person. A really nice piece :)

Cute.