What a great little drabble :D I like your depiction of Naruto, I was caught up in giggles.

You should write more :)

man, that was awesome! it was really funny and totally fit their characters! great work!

Haha, cute.

aw! you managed to make it both hot and cute! that's really cool. nice job.

OMG! I SO WISH I WAS HINATA! I love how irresistable you make Naruto with all that sexy language! Nothing would make me happier than him talking dirty to me! No way would I faint! You are amazing! I can really feel the mood and see the scene in my head! Mind giving me a few hints?

i love it!

YAY this was so good keep up the good work

although im jealous of hinata because naruto is a sexbomb...

when you said his hair was longer was it like his dads (the male model minato) hair

Hahaha...! See, it pays that I'm so lame! When someone puts my story on alert, or reviews it, or makes it a favorite, I have a nosy habit of reading about that person. Thus I found this incredible story. This is so freaking awesome. It was hilarious! Thanks for posting this so lame people like me can get a laugh for a change! :)

haha!
It's so dirty and hot, but its SO funny!

I liked the POV from perverted Naruto. you wrote it well

silly little hinata haha

chuckles and turns red. so cute hot and so hinata. lol good job on the pov

Ah! Naruto is a pervert!

Yes, Hinata is adorable... :)

oh wow!WEird

NO TOO SHORT WRITE MORE!