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| CrazyGabs 2008-05-15 ch 1, | abuseO yay. I was just searching for good fan fic. And I always know you're a good source to come to wimsey. You should go out of your comfort zone more often, this was really good. xx |
| LocoGreggo 2008-05-12 ch 1, | abuseHoly Crap that was different. Great job though. |
| Pedroia the Destroya 2008-04-18 ch 1, | abuseI like it! |
| rainefan 2008-04-07 ch 1, | abuseThat was great. And the very last sentence made me laugh, which is always a good thing. |
| JESSMARY25 2008-04-05 ch 1, | abuseI didn't know what I was going to get when I decided to click on this story but it's written by you so I had to give it a chance. I'm glad I did. I don't read slash fics but I didn't mind this time 'cause it was presented very well. I didn't feel uncomfortable. Danny and Lindsay in a dark alley = HOT! |
| The Little Corinthian 2008-04-04 ch 1, | abuseOh, you're good. You're very very, good. That was so hot. Danny in an alley, and Flack- m. :0) Again, you're very, VERY good :0P |
| IluvPeterPetrelli 2008-04-04 ch 1, | abuseI am so glad you posted this. It was great. Super funny too. |
| nyakattia 2008-04-03 ch 1, | abuseWow, that was hot! *fans self* Sometimes you just gotta try something different, and it definitely worked here! I love how you didn't tell us exactly what they would be doing undercover until the last moment. I don't particularly like slashy stuff... but the bit with the boys at the end was awesome. And the last three lines were just perfect, lol. |
| hockeymom 2008-04-03 ch 1, | abuseOk printed this quickly w/o reading it and took it with me to a Girl Scout cookie sale at the local mall. Started reading, good thing the kiddies were at a table in front of me, and WOW! Shared it with a fellow leader/friend who only reads ff when I shove something at her. She loved it too. Neither of us realized it was going to be slash until Stella kissed Linday trying to get in the bar. Best parts were "He (Don)stepped towards Stella and Lindsay and looked at them a little helplessly, “Detectives. Are you both wired up?” He squeezed his eyes shut as they nodded solemnly, the teasing light in their eyes showing they knew how desperately he wanted to know where they had managed to hide the transceivers. Tiny though the equipment was, he couldn’t imagine there was enough fabric between the two women’s outfits to conceal much of anything." and " “Just keep an eye on what is happening. And keep each other safe. Are you both armed?” The women nodded, and once again Flack and Danny exchanged incredulous looks. Where the hell were they hiding weapons?" Awesome job. I found it both amusing and very HOT! |
| NotAfraid 2008-04-03 ch 1, | abuseI loved this! It was hot, Lindsay pulling Danny into the alley, and Stella just taking Flack like she did. Great work, as always. |
| EmpireClover 2008-04-03 ch 1, | abuseI have to admit, I was a little cautious about reading this as I'm not really into Slash. But since I like all your fics, I gave it a go! It was brill! I loved Flack and Danny throughout, and I like the ending! Bravo! |
| kcatlin 2008-04-03 ch 1, | abuseDamn it!! I liekd it LOL |
| Angel of the Night Watchers 2008-04-03 ch 1, | abuseI have to admit, this is definitely different from you. I was a little leary about reading this because I'm not a fan of slash. Having said that, this was actually pretty good. I'm impressed. The descriptions were fantastic and I really found the whole thing hilarious. Great job! |
| Flynn 2008-04-03 ch 1, | abuseBless the wenches, bless them! |
| CarolineNotCarolyn 2008-04-03 ch 1, | abuseWow. So hot and so good! I really enjoyed this little fic. And sometimes getting out of your comfort zone is a good thing--and it worked for this piece and for you! I loved that Danny (and everyone else) saw Lindsey differently, and his line about Flack needing to tell Stella. The club scenes were great- just sexy enough without being over the top--and interspersing what was happening in the van with what was going on inside gave more impact to what happened after the job. Great work, as always. Hope you write more again soon! |