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| ChristinaAngel 2008-06-17 ch 11,  | abuseReally good. Very realistic with the near-death scene at the end and how Alpha Force interact with each other, I liked Li teasing Amber about Hex. I liked the villian and I'm glad Alva wasn't responsible for the threats. |
| TotalyBookworm 2008-05-07 ch 9, | abuseAww amber nd hex arnt gona continue?! o well ur da story teller. All in all grat chapter! totaly awesome! |
| lepidopteran 2008-05-01 ch 11, | abuseawsome!! cant wait for your next fic! |
| be-nice-to-nerds 2008-05-01 ch 11, | abusethis is a really good fic! This chapter was as good as all the others and I didnt notice you had difficulty trying to write it. The only thing Id say is that it ended a bit suddenly. I would have stretched it out over two chapters and written Ambers imprisonment and escape more but thats just me. But its still really good! |
| spinkle22 2008-05-01 ch 11, | abuseOoh wow, great story! I really loved this one all the way through, I think you did a great job! Well done! Spinky :D |
| Elledreamer 2008-05-01 ch 11, | abuseAw that was really good. I loved how it all worked out. Can't wait to read your new fic. Elle xx |
| spinkle22 2008-04-30 ch 10, | abuseCool, nice chapter! I like how everything's suddenly happening now... it's really good! Spinky :D |
| Elledreamer 2008-04-30 ch 10, | abuseUh oh it's getting exciting? What are they going to do? Hehe. Love it so much! Elle xx |
| spinkle22 2008-04-28 ch 9, anon. | abuseHey, good chapter! I must confess I don't really know what you mean about the suspicious thing... but I probably do and haven't mentioned it! It's a great story, and I'm really looking forward to seeing how it all works out in the end. Spinky :D P.S. Thanks for that last review - it was the only one I got for that chapter! Appreciated muchly :P |
| Elledreamer 2008-04-28 ch 9, | abuseI love it so much and now I really want to know what's going to happen. You make your writing really exciting! it's really good! Elle xx |
| lepidopteran 2008-04-28 ch 9, | abuselove it!! the tanya thing is so obvious now! i dont know how i didnt see it before! i suppose that's the art of good writing though. lol. good work! i particularly like the amber/hex relationship in this story, will all the tension be resolved?? keep it up! |
| lepidopteran 2008-04-27 ch 8, | abusei really like this story so far!! you're a really great writer! i especially like the tension between the group - it's really original and interesting to read. cant wait for the next chapter! |
| spinkle22 2008-04-27 ch 8, | abuseOoh gosh, they're getting tense! I hope it all works out OK in the end, but great chapter! Spinky :D |
| Elledreamer 2008-04-27 ch 8, | abuseYay you updated! You're really quick at updating it's great! I like how it's all developing and I like the little divide you've put between them. Really good! I can't wait to find out what will happen! Elle xx |
| be-nice-to-nerds 2008-04-26 ch 8, | abuseAwesome fic! sorry for not revewiing earlier but I was really, really busy. Oh the joys of having my school holidays at a different time to everyone else. This is realistic and well written. Keep up the good work! |