cool story. thanks for the effort.

Really cute!

Ah! I just love this :D Marti for Dasey FTW!

This is just *beyond* hilarious I love the fact that it's from Marti's POV, and I don't know *how* you managed it, but you managed to keep *everyone* in chracter.

I like how Marti is like mini!Derek, with her "evil take-over-the-world plans" (or just operation Dasey, but sometimes I think taking over the world might be easier than getting those two to admit they like each other!)

And Derek always *does* cave to Smarti cuteness, and the line "Because he's Derek" is just *so* true. There doesn't have to be a reason for anything that Derek does, it's all because He's D e r e k.

"Unless you were Marti. And she was Marti, was she not" again, hilarious and true because Marti is the only one for whom Derek bends backwards (another reason why we *adore* him, who wouldn't love a guy like that?)

Loved it!

I Love thing when there Marti POV. I like Naomi Mam and Dad. To the Second Plan! Thank You.

Okay, so I have a new appreciation for the antics of Marti. :) And I loved how she manipulated Derek so many times. That was precious.

Amazing job! =]

Marti and Dasey -- couldnt ask for more! great job :)

A few errors but all in all, you did an amazing job.

That was absolutely hilarious. The ending, especially, had me in stitches.

Great job. You write Marti fantastically.

I like Naomi's parents! :)

That was great! Seeing Marti the Matchmaker is always fun, and you pulled it off well!

Is Naomi Paul's daughter?

I hope she is, because I could SO see that. Especially with the mom and everything.

Great story!!

Lol!!

That was the cutest!!

“Boy parts” were Casey’s exact terms. And people thought Marti was eleven.

LOL, love that line.

Good job on a prompt revolving around a character who must have been hard to write for due to her age.

I love Marti! I think you did a great job writing from her point of view. Its hard because she is so young but you made it believable.

i loved it! so cute! marti and daphne are geniuses. dasey 4 ever!