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| Kittykatxx 2008-07-18 ch 1,  | abuseAww that was beautifully written and the characters were also portrayed perfectly! I'll defintely be reading the rest! |
| DAnNSfreak 2008-04-05 ch 1, | abuseYay! New Story! And dang, I was not expecting something as sad as that. Now I'm all choked up... -sobs- Great one-shot and I'm looking forward to the rest. |
| EmpireClover 2008-04-03 ch 1, | abuseI tthought i'd go on a D/L fic marathon to pick me up a bit! You nearly had me in tears throughout! Please tell me it was all a dream about Lindsay being killed, and Danny not having a daydream about where him and Lindsay were, or could be now!? Can't wait to read the rest! [Even if it is sad :(] |
| twinkeyrocks 2008-04-03 ch 1, | abuseYou have me crying like a baby over here. That was really good, and I can't see what else you have. |
| KickassScot 2008-04-03 ch 1, | abuseIn a word - WOW! That was amazing...very glad that it was only a dream though...looking forward to the next parts. |
| laurzz 2008-04-03 ch 1, | abuseMy heart was slowly shattering as i was getting to the end of that. but wow. You pulled that one round. i didnt see it coming at all. Looking forward to parts 2,3+4 :) |
| phantomliberty 2008-04-03 ch 1, | abusethat was great, can't wait for more! |
| HillHarperHOT 2008-04-03 ch 1, | abuseThat was a great story. You are not supposed to be able to right angst :-). Jen |
| mabelreid 2008-04-03 ch 1, | abuseOh... I am so glad that was a dream... I didn't want to have to murder you... Lovely story sweetie. It was so sad and yet so well done at the same time. I imagine that this is the way Danny would react if she were killed. I especially like the part with Mac. I was thinking of you the other day and hoping to hear from you with another story. Thanks for posting this. Don't have any suggestions now, but I'll think on it. |
| SallyJetson 2008-04-03 ch 1, | abuseWell it's been a while since I've read something from you ... Danny in angst so nicely captured. His going toe to toe with the suspect, Flack and then Mac spelling out his deathwish. But I'm glad it was a dream and I'm waiting to see where you take this. |
| littlemissliketofight 2008-04-03 ch 1, | abuseSo sad. Interesting to see what happens next |
| Wolves2D 2008-04-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery well done. You had me crying until the last few lines. :-) |
| Phyxsius 2008-04-03 ch 1, | abuseWow, you really had me going! I kept thinking, "It has to be a dream, he wouldn't kill of Linsday!" Wonderful job, babe! Can't wait to see where you go from here, with the other one-shots! |