Update soon, i can't wait.

...Wow, this is crazy. I had almost the exact same idea for a fic like this awhile ago. Y'know, the whole Allen-dies-but-comes-back-as-a-ghost thing? Except in my prologue (I've already written it, I just never thought about posting it) Kanda actually killed Allen. Y'know, accidentally, of course, but yeah, it was because Allen was trying to save his life. The resemblance is uncanny. Gah, well, I'm glad I never posted it, now, since I'd feel like a big copycat when I found this story. Seriously, my jaw was hanging open for a good minute when I read the story summary. Gah.

But, anyway, yours is really good so far. I think you have the characterizations down very, very well. Kanda's kind of hard to write as. u^_^

So, good luck with the rest of this story. I hope you update it soon. I'd like to read more of it. Until next chapter...

It's pretty interesting,I'm looking forward to the next chapter!!

There's something wrong with that idea. In both the manga and the anime, Allen got hit by an akuma bullet, but he survived because of his parasite innocence's powers (even though the stars had already appeared).

I didn't really notice anything, but then, I'm unlikely to notice any inconsistancies with the series anyway. xD I need to go read the manga or watch the anime or something (now that I've discovered anime online!).

Another good chapter. For some reason, I find Kanda's serious additude funny. Probably because he kinda reminds me of Hiei from Yu Yu Hakusho.

I truely love how you wrote all characters and their interactions, especially Kanda.^^ Please update soon.

Wonder what's going to happen next...good story so far. I didn't notice any errors, but it is late, so I might be oblivious. I'm looking foward to more.

Woa!! I love Kanda.. I wonder why Allen is in this state and how Kanda will be help him.

I like it it has a good ring to it. Please don't change the names I'll get confused!

nice one...

update soon

I love it! Please, please continue!!

You know something? I think your writing style is fantastic, and try as I might, I can't write like that. In that way I mean. And no one's OOC as far as I can tell. Continue!

Well this is definitely a unique fic for this fandom and I can say I've quite enjoyed reading it so far. Can't wait to see where this goes and how Kanda 'helps' Allen. Great Fic. Loved it!

Oops! I read this yesterday during English class and forgot to review... -sweatdrops- I don't like to log in at school.

Anyway! I actually know some about D. Grayman, as apposed to Deathnote! xD And now I want to go read more of the manga. Very good so far, I like it! Seeing as I've only read the first few chapters of the manga, I really don't know if anyone is OOC, and I don't remember any grammar mistakes, either, so good job! I look forward to seeing more!

Wow. This really seems like it's going to be an amazing story, and don't worry, your grammar and spelling seems fine to me. Please continue! I look forward to reading more in the future! ^^