This was a great read, and I'm glad I found it on the site. It really is the best story in this crossover section. Naruto being a pilot of both the Epyon and Wing Zero with them being essentially the same mobile suit only changed by Naruto into what they become was a great way to show where he was emotionally without breaking him from the character you gave him. A man who fought through the ages and was at the time, looking for someone...anyone who could fight him to the end, so he could be with his friends again.

It was sad when Natarle died. Her and Naruto, I felt were more of a compatible match for each other. Well, either Natarle or Murrue. I also liked Naruto's interactions with Captain Talia. lol. She seemed to be starting to understand Naruto more with each conversation that they had.

The only thing that confused me in the story and in Gundam Seed canon what was the relationship between Talia/Durandal/Rey? It seemed at times that her and Durandal were lovers, and other times Rey defended Durandal like they were. Still more often then not, Durandal saw both of them like chess pieces, so I'm not really sure if there was ever any emotional investment made on his part.

Cagalli was a very annoying character in the Gundam series, almost as annoying as Relena Peacecraft was in Gundam Wing. (Relena however, takes the prize for most useless character in the Gundam series history. Not to mention Dorothy Catalonia and her funky eyebrow-ed stalking of Relena. What the heck was up with her obsession with Relena anyway? She was as obsessed with her as Relena was with Heero.) -_-

This was a very good story, and I hope you'll be doing something similar in the future. :)

omg that was so fucking awesome in fact that was so good this story is going 2 be the example that all narutoXgundam stories are rated on

wow this is awesomealso y is it every time a gundem is hit the piolet acts as if there actual body was hit

I think that this is a very well written story so good that i read it 3 times because i thought it was interesting.

this story was corny as hell. u ruined it by trying to incorprate naruto ability into the gundam and that was a awful thing to do. Also the conversation naruto had with anyone usually begin with him saying hn or he just stands and look at them with his cold piercing eyes,I like the idea u where going with, but it seem to me that u just speed wrote this story and didnt have anyone to look at it before u post it

naruto is a dick in this story, he's acting more like sasuke than himself

Amazing story

The writing is basically solid. I see a few potential issues though. First, when Naruto stops using most of his Ninja skills, then the character of Naruto looks more like an original character with angst issues. His following orders to blindly kill just doesn't seem to be in what I remember of Naruto's character. Second, Wing Zero is the predecessor of the Strike and the others. Justice and Freedom are certainly more advanced than the Strike, and logically two generations more advanced than Wing Zero. Wing zero allegedly has a power source comparable to Nuclear, yet Azreal holds back its use for no adequately explained reason. It certainly can't be because he is concerned with upholding a treaty against the people he plans genocide on. At any rate, while some of the apparent inconsistencies could possibly be explained by the Zero system, logically it just seems unlikely that any Gundam that is two generations older than Freedom could do so well. Finally, it is curious how you are oddly following canon so closely, yet have changed the story so much.

Damn that was one of the best fics i have ever read in this site, seriously the way showed naruto's hopelessness as well as his 'i dont take crap from anyone that is corrupted/wants to kill random civilians' attitude was badass! this fic even got me crying at some points e.g naru meets hina again. all in all epic fic i hope that the rest of your works are equally good, thats all from me

most well thought out plot i have ever seen got the emotions of a real naruto where i could watch the series qnd read this and still think of them as the same person and not some naruto with smart mind out of nowhere thing grats on the story

you did very good through out the whole story, quite surprising actually. congratulations on a job well done.

Rather entertaining even if some of it felt like you stuck some G Gundam in there. I would like to comment that there is no way possible for the colony drop to have destroyed the earth. the notion is ridiculous for the speeds we are talking about with an object that is mostly flat and highly porous. At worst It would kick up enough dust to obscure the sun for the foreseeable future. true some objects have imparted far more destruction pound of pound but those were traveling at comparably ludicrous speeds.

All that being said Otherwise I enjoyed the story.

naw shin even with destiny GOES UWAAAAAAAAH and flips out id love to see him fight miliardo with his talgeese 3

did flay die at jachin due like in the anime? or is she still alive. you never clarified that.

One of the most epic stories i have ever read. Awesome Job guys