Oh, it's really cool! It's well done!

I'll have you know that I am a very picky reader and it is quite an accomplishment for a piece of literary work to hold my focus and attention. I don't give pleasant reviews - well, almost ever. Hooray for you. :) You should check out my homepage.

His characterization was SPOT ON, right down to the last detail. It is extremely difficult to capture and write his character well, and you've pulled it off. The same goes for Bellatrix, if not more. The imagery is very easy to imagine, because the description is so realistic.

This is very well done. It's particularly refined and very well depicted and detailed; it's quite an accomplishment for a piece as short as this to be that powerful.

I eagerly await your next update.

Ta ta.

update please

ah poor belle he was relli quiet men oh well tough lov i guess

D: voldie is cruel! :D I like it :P

Aww poor bella, thats a bit harsh lol but very good writing, you should continue! you know you want too! :D

Aw. Voldy was so mean about her beauty... But it was a brillian chappie. Well done =]

very interesting...I'm curious as to how she'll go about regaining her previous self...

Beautiful - More please!!

this is GOOD
but it did give me images i really didnt want to see
but i like how even though he loves her
he keeps his ruthlessness
he still tortures her

ooh, I love it , I want to see more!

Like it very much! I'm happy you updated. Poor Bella, how will she recover her beauty? Well, I hope you'll update sooner!

Oohoho...
I recognised the first chappie from where you put it on DeviantArt, so I read it. And I must say, the second chapter is just as good, if not better, than the first. Which is saying something. =]

Brilliant. That's all I have to say, really, other than UPDATE SOON!
:D

OH NOES WHAT"S GOING TO HAPPEN NEXT
plz update soon.

I don't know why i never read this before! It's good. On to chapter 2...