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Mysterious Panther
2008-06-29
ch 1,
abuseYay a decent bleach/inuyasha story without the confusion!
Kagome Lady of Darkness
2008-06-11
ch 1,
abuseI really loved it! Awesome work.
Yur-Fluffyness
2008-05-31
ch 1,
abuseThis seems...Professional. Not in a bad way, either. It's very good. I should hope to think that you would be able to add to this soon; I think it will be a very interesting story.
nobody
2008-05-25
ch 1, anon.
abusehey you have a great writting style I personally think that you should write more to this story and contact me when you post more chapters and I will be your eternal fan
Tsukoyomi
2008-05-18
ch 1, anon.
abuseI couldn't agree with you more on everything you said at the end and I can't wait to read more. I hope it goes well for you.
HALESlovesDEMONS
2008-05-16
ch 1,
abusei love this story and i cant wait till u update
MakruTree
2008-05-14
ch 1,
abuseI like this!
katiedog13
2008-05-05
ch 1,
abuseum... I'm sorry, this is really a simple mistake, but I thought I should tell you, that in this paragraph it says hair instead of air...Also, I really enjoyed your story!

"If he had to place it without using any definite terms, he would say she felt like the opposite of a hollow. Hollows had a dirty, tainted reitasu that made his skin crawl. Everything about them felt wrong and unnatural. The girl's reitasu, though, was pure and clean; like a breath of fresh hair amidst an atmosphere thick with pollution. Even her spirit thread radiated with brilliant, pink light, the like of which he had never seen before. There was no doubt in his mind that this girl was good."
lil-lostii
2008-05-05
ch 1,
abusekool
haha nxy chap plz?
GoldenRat
2008-05-05
ch 1,
abuseI love the way your fusing the two fandoms. Can't wait for more.
Bloodcherry
2008-05-04
ch 1,
abuse*smiles* I must say this chapter blew my mind! I mean, having Kagome go through all that, and have it makes sense... that's something a lot of authors leave. Making plot holes. Anyway, I really like this so far and I hope you are able to update soon!
Ja ne,
Bloodcherry
Sbgchan
2008-04-29
ch 1,
abuseThis story is great!! I can't wait for the next chapter! I'm interested to see who you would pair Kagome up with... well no matter who it is I am sure it will continue to be a totally awesome story! :)
CatgirlKitsune
2008-04-24
ch 1,
abuseSo the jewel was actually keeping Kagome's power sealed instead of powering them up. I love that idea. It show's that Kagome doesn't have to rely on a foreign power to be strong. It's all her. I can't wait till Kagome meets other shinigami, and I vote for a Kagome Toushiro pairing. Or maybe a Kagome Byakuya pairing. I love both of those guys xD. I hope you update soon. I"ll be watching you.:)
squeefan
2008-04-15
ch 1, anon.
abusewow this is a great start. i like how you started with a scenario that cold actually happen to kagome.
update
2008-04-12
ch 1, anon.
abusekeep the chapters coming! this story is great and
you are a wonderful writer.
will their be a pairing though?
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