Wow, this is amazing so far. I always wondered what would have happened if Ichigo and/or some of the others had been captured. You're a very talented writer and I'm enjoying your story so far. I hope you develop the friendship between Renji and Ichigo; it's something that I've always felt isn't done enough in the show. Anyway, keep up the great work. I look forward to the next chapter.

really good!! please update soon!

Hmn...interesting, i really don't see where your going with this and thats it all the more appealing! Please continue!^_~

Another great chapter, excellent battle scene! Can't wait to see what happens next, hope you update soon!

aw come on you had to stop?! plz update this story is really good.

Interesting story... I'm not a IchiOri fan at all, but I will read for a little while at least :)

Suggestions? I'm in a dark mood, so some Ichigo torture sounds good right now lol.

This is really good. I can't wait to see what happens next. You should give more details about the fight though. Please update soon!

This seems to have alot of promise and potential here! Just one thing its 'Reiatsu', and there was a bit of misspelled words here and there, but nothing drastic. Great job, please continue!^_~

Great start to your story! It's a very interesting premise with lots of potential. Can't wait to see where you go with it.