That was really good though it was short. I hope you write a full story on this, i really want to see something cool, please! Great job! Lol!

I LOVED this one! i think they were very in character.
Thank you for writing!

Short and nice! good job! *Thumbs up

Hahahaha how cute!

I hope that wasn't their first kiss, cuz otherwise, Ayano is going to be chasing him for days with Enraiha. XD Well done! Great humor, characters kept IC, and a situation that the Soushu could not have planned any better (since his plans often go awry anyway...), bravo!

Oh, dearie me. The Shoushu himself couldn't have planned it better. And here I was suspecting him to shoot off some innuendo about the way she licked the cone; this was better. More Kazuma, and more of a surprise, and more cute.

Haha so adorable!

Ha, this was just too cute! I just love Kazuma.

hahaha lols I love it!

lol that was cute xD

That was cute ^-^ and just FYI but you have the language set for spanish so it threw me off at first.

Te equivocaste de sección, esta es la de español ^-^UU

Hehe so cute^^
Also it happens that i love anything in lemon flavour especialy lemonade and saved ice^^

Aww! That's just so... sweet! XDD

I love Kazuma's words at the end. He's soo funny! So Kazuma xD

They're lovely IC.

Couldn't say more, this is awesome. Great work here.

Fave! ;)

Kawai! This is so cute! These two are definitely the cutect couple I know! Lol...Kazuma really does enjoy making her blush...