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Reviews For: On A Boring Sunday Afternoon

winged-monkey
2008-07-10
ch 1,
abuseXD Cute and funny. It sounded so much like Mikey. Great job!
CrazyInSye
2008-04-05
ch 1,
abuseOoh i liked this. Nice comparison of the elements. I think Mikey would be wind, because wind can't be controlled, and it's unpredicitable. It can be playful, like a gentle breeze or powerful like a hurricane!

yeaa i just had to do my own :D
great story!
Anile
2008-04-05
ch 1,
abuseWhowha, kinda creepy! I also compared the turtles with the elements once, and came to exactly the same conclusion. I liked the way you described the characters. Surprisingly enough ;) I did totally agree with you..

Anile
lorientmnt
2008-04-04
ch 1,
abuseHehe, this is really cool. I love character studies, and coming from Mikey's perspective it was really funny. Good job!
54Viruses
2008-04-03
ch 1,
abuse...Mikey decides not to tell his brothers this interesting bit of intraspection because it could result in him getting into trouble...
Then as soon as he's free he goes looking for trouble- I mean, Raph.
Maybe he needed a few more minutes to think about that one. Or a few less...
Great story!
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