Love it! I super love it! 3 GeoxLuna Rules the Megaman Universe Baby!

Though you wouldn't guess it by my name or by reading my profile, I'm actually interested in poetry. This was a very sweet poem, and I liked the idea of dividing it into three parts.

Good advice. ^^ We can only hope they'll accept it...

M NO...Yes?

Never frown because you never know who is falling in love with your smile

This one's good as well. ^^ Yeah, Subaru's a lot like that: he just wants everyone to get along! (And secretly liking Luna better. ^^) Can't wait for the last one~

A woman is like a teabag; you never know how strong she is until she's in hot water

This is awesome :D I can't wait until the next part. You did a great job~

Aw, sweet! It was slightly confusing at parts, but just because of how it was worded so it would rhyme. ^^"

Anyway, I -love- the way you portrayed Luna's feelings. I'm really looking forwards to how you write Subaru's thoughts (I'm guessing that's the next part...)

Anyway... love to LunaXSubaru! Cuteness! ^^