I really love this story so far and I can't wait for you to update. What I really like about your fic is the pace. Vegeta and Bulma haven't fallen in love two sentences into your fic like I see in a lot of other get-together stories. You're an excellent writer

I read this a while ago on so glad to see that you will be posting it here, cant wait for you to get to the action; im dieing to know what veggie did to recieve that punishment!

Wow! Poor Vegeta! I like the way you have created his character. You are showing his strength of body, character, and mind. Since he can't use ki, I guess that prevents him from flying, but at least his physcial strength is still available to him.

This is a great start for your story!

I hope you have more for us soon.