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Mon937 2008-11-08 . chapter 12
Was that meant ta be like an awesome poem? That's the way I took it anyways. So if you're alive and dead, would that make you a zombie?
Mon937 2008-11-08 . chapter 11
I wondered if the original apocalyptic story would be told. Well, I hope ya survive college (I've got a few years left before that) and keep pushin' out the good stuff
Mon937 2008-11-08 . chapter 10
Funny how the saga of Kurosaki Karin can be delayed by a simple soccer game. Heck, if I had a saga, soccer would delay that too! Keep doin' what 'cha do: pushin' out the good stuff
hisanachan 2008-09-15 . chapter 13
this was really cute and it was also a great chapter~ i liked how you put in all these couples (romantic and just friendship)

please update soon~

love always
hisanachan
hisanachan 2008-09-10 . chapter 12
this is the story behind karin's zanpakutou??

i liked it though

please update soon~

love always
hisanachan
hisanachan 2008-08-19 . chapter 11
im a little lost... but i liked it~

please update soon~

love always
hisanachan
hisanachan 2008-05-17 . chapter 10
haha it seems like shiro was going to chew out karin but its just a "do you mind playing soccer with me?" how cute~

please update soon~~ i love these short stories so much~

love always
hisanachan
hisanachan 2008-05-02 . chapter 9
karin got in trouble because she fought someone separately with the group? isnt that a little extreme?

please update soon~

love always
hisanachan
hisanachan 2008-04-12 . chapter 8
aww isshin can be really sweet neh?

please update soon~

love always
hisanachan
Mon937 2008-04-12 . chapter 8
Lucky! I would have nightmares and my dad would scold me for screaming and waking him up in the middle of the night. Thinking about it now, I'm sure it was a front, but back then it really hurt. In any case, thanx for the upload and can't wait for any other one of your uploads. Why do ppl say they can't wait when they're forced to wait? It makes no sense!
Mon937 2008-04-10 . chapter 7
Oh, that last paragraph is dying? Then I've died two or three times already. After the last one, I finally figured out why ppl knock: To avoid getting attacked by their older, stronger sister. Thanx 4 dreading the memory back up. *Shivers*. JK, u plz get the next chapter up soon.
Mon937 2008-04-10 . chapter 6
If it's nature to love rain, then I have nothing to worry about. I'm what you'd call obsessed with rain and the just after rain smell that follows. It can also sooth me to sleep, which can be bad in class. Did you notice you tend to misspell or completely omit words? It makes reading your works an exercise as I try to figure the missing word, but it's worth it.
Mon937 2008-04-10 . chapter 4
I may have said this already, but I respect anyone who is clever enough to write a poem or riddle. OK, I may have say only the riddle part, but it still applies.
Mon937 2008-04-10 . chapter 2
Ya know,I always wondered if you were gonna go into detail about the alternate Karin's timeline. Now I've got the answer. And glad you did, so far so good.
hisanachan 2008-04-08 . chapter 7
lollz i liked the ending which was really funny~

please update soon~

love always
hisanachan
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