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| Pompey 2008-04-03 ch 1,  | abuseYes, how true, especially when one considers that the "s" and the "d" keys on the English keyboard are right next to one another. 'Course, when I read "letter" I first thought of the message that comes in an envelope. |
| bcbdrums 2008-04-03 ch 1, | abusewell written, though if i were you and wanted to improve my writing, i would let a fic lie for a few days before publishing and then read it again; you will be surprised how many grammatic changes you can make to improve the flow after not looking at it for a short time. as to the story itself, you clearly know the characters. as to your interpretation, not being a slash fan myself, i cannot agree. but still, well done |
| Igiveup 2008-04-03 ch 1, | abuseCool, I liked this. |
| Chewing Gum 2008-04-03 ch 1, | abuse=3 That may be all I can summon for this. Lusty!Watson makes my day. |