Aw friendship stories are the best! Thanks for writing this. (:

How silly of me to not realize it before it happened!
Very nice.
Ciao!

This is cute. You've done a really good job of keeping this piece in the style of a diary entry. I really felt like I was reading something that Remus scribbled down one day. So, that was pretty awesome. You had a couple of spelling errors and other things like that, I don't know if you intended that, but really I kind of liked that they were there because it made it more similar to reading someone's actual diary. Overall, it's very cute and Remus-y =)

I loved it!

This was great Alice. Totally awesome. I did not even think of them changing until it actually happened. What a great birthday present. And I like the one liners you have in here, about Professor McGonogall giving him candy and about James and Lily ending up together. Very nicely done. I liked it a lot. :)

This was cute and in-character. I think there's a typo here: " McGonagall was her normal self, although she did take me aside at the end of the class and wished me a quite ‘Happy Birthday’", shouldn't it be "quiet" instead of "quite"?
Anyway, good job with this! :)
- Gaby

Oh my gosh! I never thought of this, but the idea of the animagi fits in perfectly! And I do like the style - you can hear Remus' voice coming through. I also enjoyed the way the humour was kind of laid-back and classy.

That was great, I loved the ending about giving him a book to keep him occupied while they run around in their transformed states. It made me laugh.

Man, I really liked that. I enjoyed reading that. Good good job.

Alice this is brilliant! You've got Remus's character perfectly, as well as the essence of the Marauders.

It was a bit boring, in that I couldn't really get into it, nor did the voice really seem to belong to Remus. However, I love the idea that James, Sirius, and Peter first showed their animagus forms to Remus on his birthday. I also liked how Remus described Peter's animagus, because he didn't describe it negatively. I also liked the end, it had a little tinge of rather sarcastic humor which I liked it.

Aw this is sweet. Remus doesn't strike me as much of a scatter-brain what with the random side-thoughts flying around, but you managed to make it work into concern. He is quite the intellectual. He's very...polite and considerate here. Reminds me of some classy British guy who sips tea all day.

Anyway, cute.

- Carrot

That is beautiful! Just wonderful! Remus' thoughts were written so well and the whole thing was crafted perfectly. The story unfolded really well. It was a fantastic idea to have his present be the transformations of his friends (and the book of course). Beautifully written- I loved it.
Nice job!
Thanks,
Sharkie
xoxo

Wonderful. I love how you portray Remus here, and the Animagi surprise really surprised me!

You've really done a brilliant job with Remus here, and I love the way he goes from self-doubt to feeling happy when he sees how much the Marauders care about him. The diary works really well too.

I think there's a few typos, but I'm sure you'll pick them up yourself with another read through. =]

In the meantime, I'll add this to the RL archive for you.