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| JJ Rust 2008-06-10 ch 1,  | abuseVery good story. Okay, even a red-blooded American male like me has to go "aw" to those scenes with Hermione and her children . . . and I can do that and still feel secure in my masculinity. You did a great job capturing Hermione's frustration at her unmanagable hair, and Ron was just like every guy with his "it's no big deal" attiude. Nice family-bonding type story. Mega props to you. |
| MrsGrint105 2008-04-30 ch 1, | abusewow, that was awesome! amazingly smooth written and such a joy to read! *scream for a sequel* |
| Garima 2008-04-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis piece would fit beautifully if there was a next book. :D It captures what I would imagine would have happened in the future and focuses on all the little details of the relationship between hermonie and ron perfectly! |
| All-I-need 2008-04-04 ch 1, | abuseHey there =) Well, I wanted to write this review a few hours earlier, but I was interrupted and had to wait until now...*sigh* The story is great, of course...I really like that little insight into Hermione`s and Ron`s new life =) The part about her hair was hilarious...*grin* I really like Hermione`s thoughts about her family and especially her fear to blink in case Rosie is off to school when she opens her eyes again... greets from Germany, Isi =) |
| Ella Bridi 2008-04-04 ch 1, | abuseAw! I hope someday I'll have something that'll make me forget how much I hate my hair (or how much it hates me, I should say! LOL). Really beautiful, and I believe that's exactly how parenthood must feel like. |
| MaNdErS20100 2008-04-03 ch 1, | abusethis was a very cute story! great job! |
| vakilinchuk 2008-04-03 ch 1, anon. | abusegreat story.you should write more. little reminder:ron can't drive a car.he got his driving license just before "19 years later." |
| silverbirch 2008-04-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery nice story, and so very true. |
| Elledreamer 2008-04-03 ch 1, | abuseAww I really liked it! It was nice just to see a snapshot in time of it. I thought Hermione was great and I loved her thoughts on her kids, it was just right! Yay! It was really good, Elle xx |