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The Phantom's Muse 2008-04-07 . chapter 1
SAD!!

'“Is this how you go through life, not looking where you’re going, nearly getting run over?”'
-I love how those lines are still used on him...except this time he's the one about to be flattened.

'So, there they are. Alive, and they’ll probably remain that way. But apart, forever. Never having been together. I’m not sure it’s better, really.'
-*stares at danderson* But...but...I mean, yes Fiyero won't die now...but...but...*pout*
TillITryIllNeverKnow 2008-04-04 . chapter 1
So sad! But I truly enjoyed the opposite perspective- "the road not taken" so to speak. Thank you. I'm looking forward to your next stories.
Jody 2008-04-03 . chapter 1
I loved this story.Fiyeraba is my favourite Wicked pairing and you write them perfectly.You're one of those writers that when I see your name I immediately know it's going to be a great story.
I like how you always create different situations to have them meet and yet its still believable,exciting and extremely funny.

This story is yet another example of you amazing writing skills.
fermataoso 2008-04-03 . chapter 1
Ah, yes, the old better to have loved and lost such. So true, so true.

Well, as always you are enormously talented. Odd to see them just move on, having already made their commitments to other people. Not to mention interesting to see them meet when she is treated as normal (thanks to those handy dandy glasses).

But I'm totally in love with the last line. "He hoped that she was safe." Sigh. So Fiyero. Even when he's not aware that she's the love of his life, he still worries about her safety.

Great one-shot. I'm jealous; I'm totally incapable of them. Impressive as always.
XenaWarrior2 2008-04-03 . chapter 1
I like it. You should continue, even thought i know wel i think i know your going to do that anyways, but still i like it. Oh but not to bbe pushy or anything but can You please keep writeing your fanfic. of elphaba and fiyero titled JUST TWO FRIENDS please. I really want to read the rest of it. Its klling me not knowing whats going to happen next.
Aerecura 2008-04-03 . chapter 1
As always, your language is beautiful. In my opinion, your oneshots are your best work. This made me feel very morose and depressed-it was easy to connect with Fiyero, and to feel what he felt.

Thank you for your lovely work!
Lady Tigelaar 2008-04-03 . chapter 1
Ahh! I loved that. And no, they are not better alive and apart. The only time either of them were really happy is when they were together.
HaChosenOne 2008-04-03 . chapter 1
Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful.
Awaiting My Prince 2008-04-03 . chapter 1
I think you should continue this. XD Re-work how things turn out... :) Loved it though! :D
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