Thats a really good story. Very, very well written.

I like this a lot! I like that it's Sofi's POV, and I especially like her observations about Jack and Angel's relationship. Well done!

I really enjoyed this , I hope to see more work from you soon.

Oh! So sad...but I liked it. Very original.

&sob& The last part made my ears tear!!lol, i lvoe it! OMG!!BRILLENT!!MAKE MORE!?!?!PLEASE!!

Hi - Great story. You don't see a lot of stories from Sofi's POV and I think you did it very well.
LJ

That was so sad. Finally someone did a take on Sofi and it was you! hehe.
Great job! Can't wait to see more!

Aw! The end killed me! So poignant and believable how Angel would sort of envy Jack and Bobby's close relationship.

And stop freaking out over flames! You have nothing to worry about. This wasn't perfect, but it was still REALLY good!

I loved this - you never really see Sofi's POV around here and I love that you didn't just make her a stereotypical shrew. The ending was really touching.

sublime. J'ai vraiment adoré. J'en ai les larmes aux yeux. Bravo. Je peux la traduire en français ?


Sublime. I really loved it. I have tears in my eyes. Bravo. Can i tanslate in french?

Aw! That was so sad and really good. It was nice to see that she actually does care for the Mercers despite her being a pain in the ass. So, really good and you made me tear, just a little bit. I hate when Jack dies. :(

Very good story!

Awsome. I thought you were gonna make this longer, but it was still nice.

That's GREAT! I love it. Catch ya on the flip side.