Aww, that was so cute. :] You're right, it was a bit different from your other stories, but in a good way. :D I really liked this story though: It brought back memories of good ol' childhood. Ha, ha! But, really, you're a great writer. I'm always impressed. :]

Wow! pretty good! I insist, just love your way of writing!. I would love to read another story, maybe longer? please? Thanks.
Wonderful job.
Eyr.

heh, heh thanx

Bulla is Bra's american name.

I liked that! It was the perfect after work story :)
Definately in constrast to Mistakes, but it shows your amazing versality as a writer. Hope to see more one-shots in the future.

Loved it! You should do a two shot!

That was cute. I liked it. I liked how Trunks took Pan's joke a lil too seriously, but I loved how he had to prove himself. Too cute. Great job.

aww that was soo cute
lol i liked it alot
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yay! me likey