This is a most amusing story you captured Valtine's personality quite effectivly. Please cotinuing your story.

Awesome! :) You want a cookie? HAVE ONE!

I am here to tell you that your story rocks. :D Valentine is just a wee bit out of character, methinks, but everything else was good. :D

BANANAS!

Spry!

I'm hoping this wasn't a oneshot,since it looks really good :) i'd like to read more soon

That was very good... hope you can continue it!

Aw, she's getting married to the Other Valentine? I think the original Val and her make a grand couple, not the Other Valentine from what I've heard. I haven't seen the movie...heh...but, good story!

that was great! i really liked it.

AUGH! What does the letter say? Please! I must know!

Pretty please continue this. Don't let this be the end! gives pouty face

Oh, please update :( This is wonderful. I loved the part when Valentine said 'where I could easily kiss that idiot', or something along those lines. Beautiful, really. I need an update!

you must write more. It has a really good begining! can't wait til you continue!

very interesting!

I am looking forward to the next chapter ]

oh! I wonder what the note says. Mabey it's going to say something like, i'm getting married! please continue!

please continue, it's great!

Great start... can't wait to read more. Sounds like it will be a very interesting story!

Al

Nice start! I like the idea of a bus system, maybe a

trolley system. Can't wait for more!