YOU CHEATED! You can't use someone else's characters for an asignment! Shame on you!

DAMN! that was hot! axel is so sly!xD and roxy, well, he knows he likes the attention.xD i love how you wrote axel's personality, and i love how you made roxy have a crush on him! can't wait to read more!

Lol, I loved the ending to this chapter. Poor Axel sleeping on the floor ^^ Thanks for the quick updates XD

O_o WAITWHAT?! BEST friends?! ...that...was fast...
"C'mon, Roxy, I've been here six months," OH *facekeyboard* yea... the disadvantage to reading WHILE reviewing x_@
HOLY SHlT! SHOULD AXEL BE CLIMBING TREES WHEN HE'S DRUNK!!?!?!??!??!! lmao ...waiit a second ...maybe he's just pretending XD *cackles*... nevermind... drunk. lol
AW DAMMIT. OTL SO CLOSE!
Man oh MAN I LOVE THIS!
@A@
I'M VERY VERY VEERY GRATEFUL *eyes shining with appreciation*
I'M GONNA STALK THIS STORY NAO!



typo: "Crossing my arms, a put[pout] came to my lips."
"...though I didn't really run that far, did it[I]?"
"...but with much more skill than I imagines[d] him to have."

WOW O_O Roxas must be REALLY nervous if he hasn't introduced himself yet! aw~
JEEZ. Good riddance! I thought those girls would never leave! *follows them into the showers anyways XD* *headshot*
Hahahahaha the bastard[Axel]'s doing this one purpose, isn't he? [Just finished reading about how Roxas made it a point to be the last to shower...and having his efforts go down the drain XD*
WOOHOO~ YOU GET STRAIGHT ...er.. RIGHT TO THE POINT, DOOD 8D
I won't be needing Axel's thoughts anymore ;D
*loves you forever for not putting us through the torture of watching this get dragged out!*
typo:
"I suddenly felt more self conscious that[than] I had ever been up until that moment."
"... although his eyes starting[staring] at me didn't really help..."

AW JEEZ. I LOVE awkward Roxas *_*
Caught my interest so early on in the story! You're good o_o
I wonder what Axel was thinking when he was staring at Roxas while those girls were following him... wow, if I get a look at what he was thinking, in the next chapter, I'd love you forever lol very very unlikely though.
@ your P.S: 8D I should check that song out!
your P.P.S: I KNO RITE?!?!!?! DX

Axel is kinda a jerk.
Can't he tell Roxas dosen't want it to be like that?!
Lol.
Nicee...
UPDATE...soon, please!
xoxo.

Awesome chapter! I just love situations where a character gets a steamy kiss in the shower ^^ Update soon!

hm.. sexy unpredictable axel! hehehe
for some reason i like roxas being a "fanboy", usually it's axel going crazy to get some lovin attention! *g*
do i have to say i absolutely loved the last scene? *drools*
hope you update soon! can't wait to see what you have in mind! hihi

;A;! I love your writing style, it's easy to read and captivating. Your description is amazing but it fits the story so well. I didn't find any grammatical mistakes (but I'm not the best at it, actually I'm pretty much average). Though a bit too short on the bad side.

I can't wait for another chapter~

That was good, but a little akward, lol. I like that word, too! Haha. :]] UPDATE...soon!

I liked it.

I loved it...and yea sharing showers with someone you don't know would always be akward...unless its Axel

hmm the song is haunting me.. for a kh story.. but for a different pairing! xD
so me being cat-curious searched by title and came to this.. hehe
i really liked this. axel with glasses.. piercings.. hm sounds so yummy..
and i don't think roxy's a creep.. just got to experience axel's extreme hawtness! :3
please update! can't wait to read more! =3

This is good, it would make me very happy if you continued this!~ ^^ Update soon!