oh my god I think I love you. Hm...nope but I did love that. You have a gift. Now go forth across this website and exploit it! No seriously write more. The fans want more!

WOH!! So wait...Roxy doesnt leave?! WOOT! I dont think he should have left. It's so sad! but...you know, I am completely obsessed with akuroku (almost even more so then sasunaru ((if you know it)) and I've been obsessing about that for three years!)

yes! that was hawt!:D and loved how caring axel is with roxy! and in the ending, roxy meant that he wasn't going to leave, right? i just wanna make sure.:) oh, and i can't help but say how well written this was. i enjoyed how you explained roxy's surroundings in the castle. oh and great idea on sora bit too. that should of happened in the game, so roxy would be with axel.
well, great story!

OMG, loved it!

sorry, you`re gonna have to explain the ending to me...

the is my friends responce... "how the hell can he just walk out. i mean he was all like nice sex ok, bye. it was ** hot! the ending sucked. he shouldn't have left! T.T" this is my responce... so ** hot.

This was so cute!~ Great job!

Aw how cute! I liked it. *lick* you get 10 points to you! But *sob* so much angst!

Adorable. The ending made me feel all fuzzy ^_^
Akuroku is, quite possibly, a drug xD one that I am addicted to. And so thank you for being my dealer for the day, teehee.

awz the power of axel's LURV made roxas stay! yay!

I went absolutely crazy when I read this. Like, falling off chairs crazy.

“Why did you stop?” he asked, obviously disappointed by the sudden disappearance of Axel’s mouth around him.
“Roxy, Roxy… You should have it memorized by now,” the seductive voice of his partner responded, “I never let you off that easy,"

Still gives me chills! Ah omg. Oh, and btw, you don't need a comma at the end of that, but I'm pretty sure that's just a mistake.

You were probably writing it in a hurry.

And the ending completes my life! So cute! And I know that's what everyone else said. But it is and I adore it with my life.

Lovelovelove

~Ange!

Awe too kyute! Great fic

XD im so angry that it took me a while to figure out the ending. >x> im not smart in the morning i see, lol but aw, i liked it! High fives for all!

aw that was cute ...that means he isnt leaving right~ heheheh >w

that was so cute! the ending made me smile