 Avenger of the Olympian Flame 2009-12-19 . chapter 1Please. Don't Diss yourself.
That was simply one of the best one-shots I have ever seen. I don't even remember that girl turned to stone. One sentence, and you brought a whole load of emotions in me.
So sad...
It's almost heartbreaking.
Anyways, I look forward to reading more of your work.
~Avenger |
 Crazy Twilight Lover 2009-07-06 . chapter 1How are you such an amazing author?! This is lovely, and so touching. I suppose Elizabeth was treated like the Cinderella by her parents before she ran away? I never thought about the statues harboring the soul inside...I just assumed that once you got turned to stone by Medusa, you froze that way for eternity and you kind of died. Your way works too. But that must be horrible, living in stone forever. Still, I like this! |
 FlyingToastersUnite 2009-05-18 . chapter 1Love It. So sad. |
 xXLet the Flames beginxX 2009-03-11 . chapter 1this is not very good. its not the type of not good you spend time writing up creative flames for, nor the kind you just ignore. its the type where your so exasperated by the badness you have to let them know its bad, but your really not in a mood to insult them. your welcome. there is my opinion. |
 The Sky's Bouquet 2009-02-27 . chapter 1I liked it Thai! Not many authors right about minor things. I'm one of those who enjoy minor detail in movies, shows, books, etc. I'm puzzling over making a fic about two people from my Science Life & Issues textbook. Scary, huh? Anyway, This is Taryn from GtD. So... ya...
The Sky's Bouquet(Taryn) |
 Aish Sheva 2009-02-27 . chapter 1Hmph. I don't think you got enough reviews for this. It's well written, with little to no spelling and grammar mistakes, it has an interesting plot, it's original, and I like the chilling ending. (Well, I mean...we already know what happens, Percy escapes. But it's chilling nonetheless.) Also, you've given Elizabeth a good background rather then just writing, "One day a little girl got lost. She found Medusa's restaurant thingy. She got turned into stone. The end.".
All in all, it's quite good.
Looking forward to more of your work. |
 iheartpercyjackson 2009-01-15 . chapter 1yes, yes, it was ok... |
 Sophia Anya Lee 2008-11-13 . chapter 1Wow! I like it when people take up other aspects of PJO. This was really good, well-written and the ending was pretty apt. Good job!
~Nymph of the Night. |
 annabethchase45 2008-06-22 . chapter 1I thought it was pretty good |
 storm-brain 2008-04-18 . chapter 1nice. sad. good. |
 Bubbles -bubblegum11- 2008-04-04 . chapter 1Good oneshot. I disagree, it wasn't that bad. ^^
Okay, maybe not my fav. story, but it still was pretty good. Really. ^^
I can relate to working on a oneshot instead of a main story. Sometimes I just want to write something different every once in a while.
Hope you get more reviews! |
 Clio195 2008-04-04 . chapter 1good fic, interesting topic. i wanna know what happened to the third sister! lol =) |