 RedLady 2009-10-16 . chapter 1 I can so imagine him with lots of dental floss hanging out of his mouth... HAHAH!!
And saying... he's been almost 9 hours without his presence is so Aya-ish! HAHAHA! |
 Jaque Weasley 2009-09-28 . chapter 1Oh. My. Gosh.
ºOº
You got me. Even knowin' it was impossible... Something perv got total control over my mind x.x''
Oh. My. Gosh.
I really have fun readin' the story, Aya \\o//
My love, Aya... *lol*
Great fic, by the way ;)
xoxo |
 chika1345 2009-08-14 . chapter 1that was funny |
 SapphireCuatro 2009-02-15 . chapter 1Wow...that was so wrong. This was awesomely hilarious! ^^ |
 Unbidden-Angel 2009-01-27 . chapter 1I really loved it! Poor Kyo. |
 Avec Plaisir 2008-10-25 . chapter 1I hadn't had time last night to review this wonderful story, so I shall do so now.
I liked it, very much. (I'm terrible at reviews. V.V)
I've read a lot of stories with basically the same plot line but different characters, but yours was spectacular.
You put in a lot of imagery and what not. It really is good. 8D
Thanks for the PM, too. :3 |
 Kunoichi Kyo-chan 2008-04-30 . chapter 1 ROFLMAO! Simply amazing. Made me giggle. xD |
 Pol-kun 2008-04-24 . chapter 1Frenchie, you are a complete pervert!
I love this fanfiction, but next do something that people like me won't take so wrong...lol. Great job
LL |
 RoarSaysDaniSaur 2008-04-17 . chapter 1this story was hilarious!!
i burst out laughing a million times so my parents came to see what i was up to...
very well written. maybe you should make a sequel inspired by the next time you go to the doctors?
~~mii-chan~~ |
 osaka-chan4 2008-04-12 . chapter 1BWAHAHA! Hilarious! Great job! |
 LadyKazekage 2008-04-09 . chapter 1 Oh My God, that was hilarious!
It makes me wonder what goes on at your dentist's office...
mwa ha ha ha... |
 Fullmetal-chinchilla 2008-04-09 . chapter 1 I was just floating around your fanfiction page, and I read this. Oh my giddy aunt it was awesome. The bit where you where talking about Yuki and Kyo sharing one thing in common was a bit confusing though, as the fourth sentence doesn't fit. (Yeah..that's the only problem I've found, CUZ I'M A CRAPPY CRITIQUER!)
Waiting eargerly for your next fanfiction,
Devon 83 |
 Miss-Murder 2008-04-04 . chapter 1Ha ha, that was funny!
Poor Kyo... That must of been awkward!
Good job! |
 BunBun-Zarkelador 2008-04-04 . chapter 1That was so funny!! good job! |
 Hyperactive Energy 2008-04-03 . chapter 1Haha,I didn't see that coming.Good story xD |