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RedLady
2009-10-16 . chapter 1
I can so imagine him with lots of dental floss hanging out of his mouth... HAHAH!!

And saying... he's been almost 9 hours without his presence is so Aya-ish! HAHAHA!
Jaque Weasley
2009-09-28 . chapter 1
Oh. My. Gosh.
ºOº
You got me. Even knowin' it was impossible... Something perv got total control over my mind x.x''
Oh. My. Gosh.
I really have fun readin' the story, Aya \\o//
My love, Aya... *lol*
Great fic, by the way ;)

xoxo
chika1345
2009-08-14 . chapter 1
that was funny
SapphireCuatro
2009-02-15 . chapter 1
Wow...that was so wrong. This was awesomely hilarious! ^^
Unbidden-Angel
2009-01-27 . chapter 1
I really loved it! Poor Kyo.
Avec Plaisir
2008-10-25 . chapter 1
I hadn't had time last night to review this wonderful story, so I shall do so now.

I liked it, very much. (I'm terrible at reviews. V.V)
I've read a lot of stories with basically the same plot line but different characters, but yours was spectacular.
You put in a lot of imagery and what not. It really is good. 8D

Thanks for the PM, too. :3
Kunoichi Kyo-chan
2008-04-30 . chapter 1
ROFLMAO! Simply amazing. Made me giggle. xD
Pol-kun
2008-04-24 . chapter 1
Frenchie, you are a complete pervert!
I love this fanfiction, but next do something that people like me won't take so wrong...lol. Great job
LL
RoarSaysDaniSaur
2008-04-17 . chapter 1
this story was hilarious!!
i burst out laughing a million times so my parents came to see what i was up to...
very well written. maybe you should make a sequel inspired by the next time you go to the doctors?

~~mii-chan~~
osaka-chan4
2008-04-12 . chapter 1
BWAHAHA! Hilarious! Great job!
LadyKazekage
2008-04-09 . chapter 1
Oh My God, that was hilarious!

It makes me wonder what goes on at your dentist's office...

mwa ha ha ha...
Fullmetal-chinchilla
2008-04-09 . chapter 1
I was just floating around your fanfiction page, and I read this. Oh my giddy aunt it was awesome. The bit where you where talking about Yuki and Kyo sharing one thing in common was a bit confusing though, as the fourth sentence doesn't fit. (Yeah..that's the only problem I've found, CUZ I'M A CRAPPY CRITIQUER!)
Waiting eargerly for your next fanfiction,

Devon 83
Miss-Murder
2008-04-04 . chapter 1
Ha ha, that was funny!
Poor Kyo... That must of been awkward!
Good job!
BunBun-Zarkelador
2008-04-04 . chapter 1
That was so funny!! good job!
Hyperactive Energy
2008-04-03 . chapter 1
Haha,I didn't see that coming.Good story xD
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