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| bookworm45 2008-04-10 ch 1,  | abuseWe'll just call it slightly AU, and it's perfect! |
| marialisa 2008-04-06 ch 1, | abuseLove how you tied in the hug after Frankie. This was a great little one shot. |
| Kat31 2008-04-04 ch 1, | abuseOh, very nice. Everyone needs a Flack. Amused that he ran away when Mac appeared. |
| citeyoursource 2008-04-04 ch 1, | abuseGreat story, as always. I wish it would've been a tad longer though. I can't wait to see 4x16. |
| ThnksFrThMmrs87 2008-04-04 ch 1, | abuseIt's so aggravating when the reviews screw with your stories but regardless of that this story was fantastic, as yours always are. Love the subtlety of the Stella/Flack and the last paragraph especially. |
| notesofwimsey 2008-04-03 ch 1, | abuseI like the story - you've woven the info you had into a good plot, and done some great character work with Flack, Stella, and Mac. The voices are solid and you tied in some old info (the hug after Frankie's attack) and some new (the jacket and his warmth) really well. It looks like it will be a tense episode! |
| hockeymom 2008-04-03 ch 1, | abuseStill you did a great job. I loved how he pulled her into a hug and she remembered the last time, the only other time. And the line about his jacket smelling like him. I also liked how you indicated Mac's more controlled concern, it made it obvious that Flack's reaction was more emotional, more off the cuff, without thought, but based on feelings. Great job! |
| TessaStarDean 2008-04-03 ch 1, | abuseThis was great. I love that you took the time and described the hug, and how it was different from the last one. I love that you spelled out the first two breaths she took and how they were different. So good. Although, I definitely wouldn't complain about a sequel... |