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The-Worlds-Naneth
2008-06-02
ch 1,
abuseNice! I like the idea, but you switch from third person to first person near the begining, try and keep it in either first or third.

Other than that...well done!

Yours

The-Worlds-Naneth
RennxTorak Forever
2008-05-08
ch 1,
abuseOMG that last quote was awsome...
DevilsAngelSaphire
2008-05-04
ch 1,
abuseawe... that is adorable! I only just finished reading the first book but any true reader can tell it's a good series and that you just wrote an awesome romance, no matter how short it was. ( i've writen smaller)
Hazelstar
2008-04-19
ch 1,
abuseAw, that's so sweet! Torak/Renn 4EVER!
Hazelstar
anime-wolf-lucky
2008-04-11
ch 1,
abuseaw ^^

sweet
Rhiannon Hunter
2008-04-04
ch 1,
abusetht was fluffy

one thing though you said renns mom was the raven mage she was the viper but otherwise its one of the best (or maybe the best) CoAD fanfics here
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