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| SkywardShadow 2008-07-25 ch 1, | abuseWow. If this is any different from what Ryo was actually thinking at the time, I'm surprised. This poem is great; it's powerful and it rhymes really well. Nice job!! |
| journey maker 2008-06-10 ch 3, | abuseI have a question?? Is the first and the third poems the same? |
| journey maker 2008-06-10 ch 2, | abuseBRAVO!! Again you've shown that you are a great writer of Poetry.. I love this one... |
| insaneTrash 2008-04-05 ch 1, | abuseI really enjoyed reading this, and I loved the last three lines and also strangely 'I don't remember what I've done today.' In my opinion they held the most impact for the reader. (Well me anyway ^_^.) It also has a really nice flow to it! I'd love to read more poem's that belong to you. Keep it up =] |
| Rannaty 2008-04-04 ch 1, | abuseIt's difficult to believe I found a YGO poem I actually Like 0.o Good job! I like how it begins and ends with the laughter theme, it's very stylish. The end is almost haunting, in fact... AND it rhymes, too! |
| Spidey meets Wizard-Theif 2008-04-04 ch 1, | abuseAwesome job! -Wt |
| journey maker 2008-04-04 ch 1, | abuseWOW!! This is a really intense Poem and it really does describe how Ryou thinks and feels about Bakura... Great Story... |