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Reviews For: Unheard Laughter

SkywardShadow
2008-07-25
ch 1,
abuseWow. If this is any different from what Ryo was actually thinking at the time, I'm surprised.
This poem is great; it's powerful and it rhymes really well. Nice job!!
journey maker
2008-06-10
ch 3,
abuseI have a question?? Is the first and the third poems the same?
journey maker
2008-06-10
ch 2,
abuseBRAVO!! Again you've shown that you are a great writer of Poetry.. I love this one...
insaneTrash
2008-04-05
ch 1,
abuseI really enjoyed reading this, and I loved the last three lines and also strangely 'I don't remember what I've done today.' In my opinion they held the most impact for the reader. (Well me anyway ^_^.)
It also has a really nice flow to it!
I'd love to read more poem's that belong to you.

Keep it up =]
Rannaty
2008-04-04
ch 1,
abuseIt's difficult to believe I found a YGO poem I actually Like 0.o Good job! I like how it begins and ends with the laughter theme, it's very stylish. The end is almost haunting, in fact... AND it rhymes, too!
Spidey meets Wizard-Theif
2008-04-04
ch 1,
abuseAwesome job!
-Wt
journey maker
2008-04-04
ch 1,
abuseWOW!! This is a really intense Poem and it really does describe how Ryou thinks and feels about Bakura... Great Story...
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