i like how you made Kurama tell the truth in the story. Believe it or not I liked how you made Callie very sick and not exactly be in the greatest state. This is because whenever I write I'm scared to make the characters take risks. LOVE this story!

Well, this is very sad. I forgot to comment how happy I was that Jin made an appearance ( I love the guy xD)

But this was very suspenseful.

OMG! When you had asked if you should also make Hiei jealous as well, I NEVER expected it to be a girl! And Shizuka! I admit I did think it was going to be Shizuma xD You really surprised me!

I don't understand the innuedo involving Tupperware ._. can someone explain to me please?

Lol i just thought of something. Because Enma doesn't give her the operation the balance of the three worlds will be THREATENED because of 3 very pissed off Demons and then some xD LOL

OMG! xD

I LOVE it when opposite attracts!

I cry so much during chapters 25 and 26, I mean there was snot and everything! I really thought you were going to do that jerk move of killing of the main charater and everything. ok i vagely remember that there was a sequal to this on your profile or something but I didn't remember that until it was actually mentioned... Yes I feel stupid, yes I became addicted to this story, and yes I will read the next one as I am waiting of Callie to gloat over her spirit beast and to hold it over Yusuke.

I just wanted to high five you on your vast improvement in writing since the last series. Seriously, good freaking job. There's still (and always is) room for improvement, but great job over all. I was a little peeved reading the last series because the writing kind of got on my nerves, but you've got a great handle on it right now. I'm glad I stuck around to see you get to this point! Now onto the next chapter!

T-T I also cried at the beginning... and laugh when they finally notice she was alive,... Hiei was right though it's Myouga's fault though, he accidentally pulled the plug literally, the heart monitor's plug XD...

I felt crazy crying then laugh but it was a good, a nice ending...

Great work )

T-T it made me actually cry... I cried... but It was really good chapter...

i LOVE your stories!

and i LOVE the tug-team of Callie and Hiei... And I LOVE how Hiei act out of character )

sorry if it takes too long for me to review, new here )

I envy you, and all writers like you being able to come out a REALLY good, awesome, nice stories...

So, i settle my self just reading other people stories... keep it up ),.,

P.S.

My english is not that good though, sorry about that... sorry to review the same for different chapter, i thought it will for the whole story (

i LOVE your stories!

and i LOVE the tug-team of Callie and Hiei... And I LOVE how Hiei act out of character )

sorry if it takes too long for me to review, new here )

I envy you, and all writers like you being able to come out a REALLY good, awesome, nice stories...

So, i settle my self just reading other people storied... keep it up ),.,

P.S.

My english is not that good though, sorry about that...

I'm loving this fic so far even though I'm not usually a Kurama/Botan fan. You're a very talented writer, and I hope you keep making stories. Can you please tell me name of that fanfic you recommended in chapter 16, I'm having trouble finding the author.

i love the story.

Hieis a demon, he doesn't have a heart beat.