i love how you focus on her feelings. there was no dialogue, but it works SO well. =)

An excellent Aerith introspective piece. She's such a private person, at times, that it is often difficult to grasp how she feels. I think you have done a great job of exploring this in your fic. As you say there are many stories written from Cloud's perspective, but woefully few written from Aerith's. And certainly even fewer written with this caliber of writing style. Great job!

Oh. That was simply lovely. A very nice take on things- it's good to see Aerith's POV on Cloud. I think you captured her voice and feelings very well. :) Great work.

Aw...so beautiful... Keep it up, your fic's great!