It's a bit short, but I like the idea of Abby trying to get Tony to stay. I can definitely see her doing that. She's especially vulnerable, after Gibbs leaves, I think. Cute!
I liked the way you wrote it, it was funny:)
But are we supposed to think that Abbey is trying to tell Tony something but can't bring herself to do so which is why she keeps saying goodbye and asking him questions just like his mother? LOL
That was sweet.