 Indiana9311 2008-08-29 . chapter 3you should have the order go like this:two-bit, cherry, curly, steve, johnny, ponyboy, and dally then darrynd maybe angela, Please write some more soon! |
 blame it on the government 2008-08-03 . chapter 3good. |
 Sometimesiwish19 2008-08-03 . chapter 3the next chapter should be about steve randle :D |
 ShotgunOpera 2008-07-17 . chapter 3lol these are cool, it reminds me of something similar a friend and i did during boring classes, except we did them with characters from "lord of the rings" [since lotr was coming out during the time that i was in high school] if you're stuck and need help, lemme know, i'm more than willing to offer help :) |
 MacAttack5 2008-07-02 . chapter 3TWO BIT! |
 alex1993 2008-04-22 . chapter 3I think it was pretty good :D i would definitely like to read something concerning Curly Shepherd and Angela Shepherd, since they're rarely mentioned, it would be fun to play around with those characters. ;) |
 Juvenile Success 2008-04-17 . chapter 2I'm pretty sure Ponyboy probably would be the better looking brother. ;) Since Hollywood looks are great and everything, but the fact Ponyboy is ignorant to how he looks is a way more attractive quality.
Anyway.
I really like this, it's quite unique. |
 fullofmetal 2008-04-13 . chapter 3Dear god... Some of these make me want to cry... Your story is a little sad, (I mean emotionally... Not pathetically. Yeah.) but it's wonderful all the same. > |
 ElfMaiden48 2008-04-13 . chapter 3I think that the next chapter should be Cherry Valance! |
 prettyinpink2165 2008-04-13 . chapter 3Definatly
A) Cherry Valance
This is a really interesting story. Keep going! |
 Holy Frog 001 2008-04-11 . chapter 3do twobit! please!
rIBIT. |
 Patrick-Ryan-93 2008-04-11 . chapter 3This is AWSOME!
Oh, the next one should be about Two-Bit. I just love him so much :D |
 waniphil 2008-04-11 . chapter 3nice job. Umm I want to see Darry's chapter. You have any plan for him? |
 NellieGURL 2008-04-11 . chapter 3I actually enjoyed the Tim Shepard chapter! I vote for Steve. (and if we can vote twice, for Two-bit) |
 The-Fan-Who-Lived 2008-04-11 . chapter 3This is HILARIOUS but at the same time serious and sad and overall emotional. I love it soo much and maybe this stuff might not be true or anything but its awesome to think of. I vote C i think but i love them all please update and feel free to email me for any ideas i have
happy writing
Leah Neal |