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Owl Emporium
2008-05-24
ch 1,
abuseThat was...bittersweet I guess you could say. Poor remus, but he'll discover how much of a daft person he was being and be happy. :) Great job! :)

Angelica
LittleMissTrumpetPlayer
2008-04-13
ch 1,
abuseBun in the oven... XD

I like how you made the events so descriptive, and able to fit them into cannon.
chocoluvr
2008-04-11
ch 1,
abuseGood chapter with Tonks finding out that she's pregnant after being careless about birth control once. Too bad she lost her job over her marriage to Remus. It sounds like Umbridge wants to forcibily sterilize all werewolves to prevent them from breeding.
siriuslycoco
2008-04-05
ch 1,
abusegreat job! i loved this story, especially the bun in the oven part haha...awesome job and I cannot wait for the sequel! siriuslycoco :)
AmazingBouncingFerret445
2008-04-04
ch 1,
abuseooh nice. the "bun in the oven" bit was cute :D i cant wait for the sequel.
ishandtwofourths
2008-04-04
ch 1,
abuseoh, huzzah! what a loverly way to end my week. a wee bit of fic and some cookies before i go to bed... nice. :)

anyhoo, as usual, you portray canon events so well, in unique ways that somehow i never think of. a while back i was trying to work out when tonks and remus would've conceived, actually... i don't remember what exactly i came up with, but my point is, that as usual your take on it is so wonderful that i think i'd prefer to consider it canon instead. obviously the two of them weren't trying to get pregnant, and it makes so much sense for just one slip after a particularly emotional night led to this. and wow, as if the timing wasn't bad in the grand scheme of things, what with voldemort's rise and all, but finding out right after tonks got sacked and while umbridge is skulking around and trying to ruin their lives even more? well, when it rains it pours, i guess.

i have to admit, what surprised me (pleasantly, of course!) was the way remus took the news. yes, there was some great setup for his insecurities kicking in at the end there, which was what i was expecting, but his reaction at first was simply delightful! i'd like to think that there was amazement and wonder for him first, before the noble part complex started to kick in. ;)

but! what'd i'd never even considered before was mad-eye leaving tonks some things in his will! oh, i LOVE that idea. it just WORKS. there really wouldn't be any need to baby-proof moody's house, eh? i'm sure he'd already have every safety-spell known to wizardkind cast already, lol.

but, yes. as always, wonderful stuff. i can't wait for the next part! let's see how remus' insecurities rise to the surface, and here's hoping tonks will be able to knock some sense into him... for a while, at least. :)
otherrealmwriter
2008-04-04
ch 1,
abuseThis was a really good story. I loved how it went and the depth and emotion in it. I love also the fact that the reaction was simlar to the one James had when Lily was expecting. This was really neat and very nice. I really liked this one. It was just so sweet and touching.
Animekitty47
2008-04-04
ch 1,
abuseThe inheritance thing never even occured to me. >.< Oh well, it was good and the bun-in-the-oven joke was cute. You better update next week like you said you would! I'd hate to have to actually use this flamethrower, I haven't had to use it in a while. :)
Nvrmore
2008-04-04
ch 1,
abuseI did very much enjoy this story. There's so much going on - as one would expect in a war-time story. Some of it I forgot.

But once again you did a great job capturing the wonderful relationship, the intimacy, the emotion.

Kudos.

I also like the set up for Lupin's insecurity.
xLupinxLoverx
2008-04-04
ch 1,
abuseAnother sequel? I'm very excited! Anyway, this was another amazing story. The characterisation was spot-on, and this story proved that Tonks is more than just a clumsy, happy Auror. I loved the entire fic, and I am anxiously waiting for the sequel!
Glorious Clio
2008-04-04
ch 1,
abuseOnce again, simply brilliant. I loved it. And Remus's character is dead on, as is Tonks's. And I love how it once again fits in flawlessly with Deathly Hallows...
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