This is totally wicked! I love it. Great work. :D

Originality is refreshing, except the ending was kind of abrupt. Nevertheless, it was a good oneshot.

I adored this tale. Loved how you wrote it. You have have a great rythm to your style.

I would say you could have drawn it out a bit more though.
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Pft, who needs birthday presents; this is awesome at any time of the year. Thank you for writing it for me! I love it! I had such a stupid smile on my face from start to the finish. ^^

I love the way you write Alfeegi's voice: so put-upon and too clever for his own good and *Alfeegi-like* that I just want to pet him. I think my favourite part is everyone's reaction to Lykouleon's fake name, which is just hilarious ("Your real name, please?" oh god, I nearly died). And of course I am an absolute sucker for Alfeegi backstory, so I loved this glimpse into his past that you gave. Lykouleon/Alfeegi interaction is also for the win; Lykouleon is so goddamned tricksy *g* and I love it. Also bonus points for Alfeegi being annoyed by Ruwalk without even knowing his name.

A really fun scenario, and exactly the kind of Lykouleon+Alfeegi thing I'd been craving. Thank you very much again~