Wonderful story. Beautifully written.

This was truly amazing! I just thought of this couple...excellent!

How can you be unsure if you liked it? I loved it! Present tense actually suits the story better than past tense would have, in my opinion. Very well done, greatly written, and all that jazz. :)

I think the present tense suited it very well, and your dialogue was especially good. I really enjoyed this :)

The present tense works for it. It's sad, but in the right way.

It's really hard to write a story like this with good tasted and not jumping the gun, per se. I liked it :D

Wow, I love this! Your an amazing writer and I wish you would continue this story! Honestly, in my opinion it dosent feel complete :( Need more FrankxDwayne! Pleease -puppy face- Anywho, I really did love this and think you did a really great job! Love you and goodbye :D Sincerely,

xMysterious Darknessx

Why don't you have the anonymous reviews set up, it makes it very hard to anonymously review. (Fairly obvious statement).

Any-way, how on earth could you be unsure as to whether you liked it when I loved it? Honestly, I thought that it was amazing, I really liked the way that you kept them so perfectly in character, you didn't make it ridiculous and such a situation purely for it being...there.

The fact that I'm watching it right now and I really like this, that says something good.

Sincerely,

The Sickly Satirist

this story rocks. it's cute, but still angsty adn true to the characters. adding to favs.