Intersting story and I like the way you write. I'm glad I stumbed into it. Thanks you for taking the time to write and post it!

Can you write more to this story? this is interesting

Good! Your detail is excellent! Even with the short run down of the calls Roy is reminiscing over I could see what the guys were doing. The story you have so far flows well and the dialog is very believable. It will be interesting to see what your plot structure will be!! You've created some great foreshadowing.
I look forward to you finishing this one up!

I cant wait to read the end of this story. I really enjoyed this.

Love the story...can't wait for more!

like it alot. please continue,this story could go in so many directions. I am waiting very impatiently.

Oh Please! More!
I can't wait!

This is not half-bad, don't stop! I want to see where it's going. The opening scene with the medics asleep in the squad reminded me a bit of Sandra McDonald's story "Hank's Men".

Awesome story. You have a real talent for writing. I'm curious to know if the story continues or ends there.

Great story. Very well written. You kept everyone in character. Even Mike Stoker. He's not in very many fanfics. I've written one about him. It's called 'One Man Band'. If you read it, please leave a review. I'm getting off track. Your story is really good. Is this the end, or is there more?

Squeaky