Uh oh! This could get nasty!lol but very good at that! I loved the chapter! So happy to be around each other aren't they? *laughs* Keep up the great work! :D
Love
Kitten

I like the style of attitudes you have, that everything is really rather mundane despite the drama, it makes it amusing. However your writing style could use improvement. Try to make longer paragraphs more often. There was one section with many sentences as their own paragraph that really could have been lumped together to make one paragraph.

I haven't been on FF in forever, and this is the the first story I've read since I've been back. I'm glad I read it first. It's wonderful, fabulous, and tickles my funny bone perfectly. Thank you!
I hope you can update soon, I can't wait to read more.

Woahh. Amazing plot. I absolutely love your characters. Hilarious.

Uh-oh, spaghetti-os. Now what? I can't wait to read and find out. (:

I love it-the characters are perfect. I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE REST!

She is very practical, isn't she? The opposition between the pains of being a dragon's captive vs possible rescuers... much to consider, no?

Yay! longer chappies! That's cool. I really like this one. Is she not going to have a name like in the other one? Anyway, December 19? I can't wait!

It was nice, I liked how she was astounded, that this boy would be her true love. Also how we don't get a good Idea of who he is just that she does not like him, which adds a since of allure to the story. I found a few Errors, but other wise very well done. Keep writing!! :D
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Kitten

WHOA, you updated!! Quite honestly, I was giving up hope. And I certainly hope the next chapter comes long before December 19th!

Well, what can I say? Another excellent (albeit short) chapter! You really do wonder about those fairy-tales and what happens if it were not a Mary-Sue in the story and what if she didn't know the "protocol," as it were.

I like the idea so far. It looks like it will be a funny. =D

This is intoresting. I hope theres more! :)
Love
Kitten

Excellant, interesting chapter! Please update soon.

Very refreshing and different from the 'classic' fairy tale. Love the cockroach bit! We need more practical dragons around here! I also love the heroine already! Keep on keepin on.
Until we meet,
the3rdbronte

I have to agree: light and humorous is your strong suit. Or maybe the knight in shining armor is. Shining armor... strong suit... What an egregious pun. Ugh.

So anyway, (smoothing hair and trying to be more presentable) I am absolutely thrilled to see another offering of this ilk from you.

I have a hundred questions for the first chapter, but I'll only ask one:

A cockroach!? (Okay, it's not really a question.)

Excellent beginning. Write on, O Skilled One. - M.T.

I think that it's off to a wonderful start. I can't wait to see what happens next.