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| Lysis 2008-05-14 ch 1, | abuseI enjoyed your story and am glad you posted it. I especially enjoyed your poke at Darius and the glimpse into his mind, that was a good bit of writing there. It's nice when the author of a story allows speculation on other characters that existed in Alexandros' world. And your Alexander and Hephaistion are very erotic and I enjoyed the tenderness you showed between the two in the first scene. I hope you'll write some more. |
| ullena 2008-04-18 ch 1, | abuseHey-a you! It is a very good story, I like especially the beginnining, the sunrise and all the saucy (?) effects. Very "romantic" :) I only miss the bedroom-scenes :P |
| Kizzykat 2008-04-07 ch 1, | abuseI always feel bad if I see a story that hasn’t been reviewed, especially if it’s from a new writer, but fewer people seem to review on this site now. Readers! It’s most discouraging for a writer if no one reviews! I don’t know why no one has reviewed it as it’s enjoyable, if a little bit difficult to follow what is going on in the second part. You certainly lead us to believe that it is Hephaestion with Alexander (if the first pair are indeed those two), but you’re not telling me it’s Cassander with Alexander! Or is Hephaestion escaping from Alexander’s snoring? Hopefully all will be revealed. |