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| gythia 2008-07-24 ch 26,  | abuseooh, quite an adventure. Now we're head to head with the alternate universe, with this completely different account of the Shadow destruction of Arisia. Are we going to meet Marcus soon? |
| gythia 2008-07-12 ch 24, | abusevery exciting fight! hmm "do not apologize for victory", I wonder where I've heard that before? lol. |
| gythia 2008-07-02 ch 23, | abuseI absolutely love the conversation outdoors at the party! |
| JC 2008-06-22 ch 22, anon. | abuseIt,s a Good. I got a better story idea for you,a story on the Centauri/Orieni. |
| gythia 2008-06-03 ch 20, | abuseThat was delightful! I loved the tramp freighter! And the art object! And everything! |
| gythia 2008-05-26 ch 19, | abusea nice little adventure! |
| Julie the Tall Terror 2008-05-02 ch 15, | abusePoor Akel. *sniffs* How tragic. On a lighter note, I was pleased to see Bramner. The series only told us about him (and little at that) after he was dead and then jms didn't use him in the movie. I hope you continue to put him to good use. :) |
| Julie the Tall Terror 2008-05-02 ch 14, | abuseAkel's history gives the warrior caste more depth. It is all too easy to stuff them into a warmonger role (something the series struggled with, remember season 2's first episode?). It is refreshing to see that like the religious caste, the warrior caste has members who don't quite fit in the caste they were born in, but also aren't willing to switch castes. The Anla'shok is their only other choice and makes them all the more unique. Good job! |
| Julie the Tall Terror 2008-05-02 ch 13, | abuseDadatada! Renati to the rescue (sorry couldn't resist). There have been several hints that there is something different about her, even beyond that she is rather fierce for one of the religious caste. I look forward to finding out what it is. |
| Julie the Tall Terror 2008-05-02 ch 12, | abuseLOL! The last thing I expected was for Zathras to show up. Very cool. :) |
| Julie the Tall Terror 2008-05-02 ch 11, | abuseWilliam Cole? Marcus' brother? Cool! The conflicts between the trainers is keeping their teacher on her toes, too. :) Looking forward to more. |
| Julie the Tall Terror 2008-05-02 ch 10, | abuseInteresting survival trip. I wasn't able to predict what would happen or who would win. But my favorite part of this chapter are the last lines. Congratulations to Renati, indeed. :) |
| Julie the Tall Terror 2008-05-02 ch 9, | abuseAre they wiping the memories of those who don't make the cut? You didn't say it directly, but it would make sense given the secrecy. I bet they didn't bother mentioning it to the recruits. The mouth harmonica was cute. :) *snickers* |
| Julie the Tall Terror 2008-05-02 ch 8, | abuseMwahahaha! You are evil! But I love it. :) Lets see how Renati likes teaching Humans. :) |
| Julie the Tall Terror 2008-05-02 ch 7, | abuseGood combat scene, though I wouldn't want to see it in video. That would be quite bloody. Again, I am pleased with how you write Minbari strength: they are not the strongest in the galaxy and not cowards cowards when faced with a strong opponent. Very good. :) |