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| CSIgsrFANOH 2008-04-09 ch 1, | abuseI miss GSR ...I am hoping the 'Hi' was the light at the end of the tunnel. |
| Ming1 2008-04-08 ch 1, | abuseI'm still smiling. Thank you for this lovely story. |
| sarapals with past50 2008-04-07 ch 1, | abuseMuch better ending that that "hi" at the end! Go be a writer in Hollywood! Excellent little story. |
| 22114 2008-04-06 ch 1, | abuseAww, that was really sweet. Loved the little story! And I gotta say, I feel a million times better after that phone thing. He just sounded so happy to hear from her. Cause we all KNOW it was her!! |
| El Gringo Loco 2008-04-05 ch 1, | abuseA cute little piece. |
| CSI junkie 247 2008-04-05 ch 1, | abuseSo cute, I really hope they find a way to keep Sara in the plot line. And I'm keeping my fingers crossed for her to return. |
| BrookeGreene 2008-04-04 ch 1, | abuseI was thinking of writing their conversation, but I decided not to. I figured that someone else would write one anyway and I should leave it to the more talented writers, since mine would suck. Anyway, my one problem with this was that she called him Gilbert. I used to like that in fics, as long as it wasn't used in the now cliche "Hello, Gilbert" line, but it was just *completely* ruined for me by lawyer lady (I don't know her name, and even if I did I wouldn't use it.) I hate the thought of Sara calling him the same name that woman used earlier. Now I think GSR shippers should band together and think of something special that Sara can call him. Yes, I am crazy. But yeah, other than that it was good. |
| SARA SIDLE GRISSOM 08 2008-04-04 ch 1, | abusethat would be funny if thats what was going on in their heads lol |
| BeckyCSI 2008-04-04 ch 1, | abuseFluffy fluff...fluff ;D I love it! I'm from the UK obv so we haven't actually had the epi air here...but i've seen it lol XD I was so freaking happy at the end! Your take on this is what i'd love to have seen happen :] and Sara's manly Ecklie voice? made me laugh! Perfeck! Becky x |
| Keegan Elizabeth 2008-04-04 ch 1, | abuseJen...only for you my GSRBFF would I be reading post episode stuff! And thanks for the uh anonymous shout out --though not so anonymous with your coughs...are you getting sick, sweetie? Lmao. Anyway, the story is SO cute. but I'm still depressed... damn the freaking TPTB! but yeah I like that Gil called her "babe." I dont really see him calling her babe but it was cute in this instance...and I got Sonny and Cher singing in my head "I got you babe..." I think I could be slightly delusional but that's okay. Again, too cute (except for the part where you said she already came once and then left again...b/c damn it...once she's back she's back for good lol --or in my mind she is --or wait in my mind she hasnt left... so yeah I'm going to stick w/ my lovely world of Memories) Enough rambling from me...btw...I posted Ch.22! Go me! |
| WalkerTRngr 2008-04-04 ch 1, | abuseAw I loved it!! How sweet of her to send him the theraflu (that stuff REALLY does work the inventor's a genius!) Great job!! :) |
| sprat 2008-04-04 ch 1, | abuseThatwas good |
| PiperG 2008-04-04 ch 1, | abuseLOVE IT! I am showcasing this on Jorja Fox's imdb message board. YOU ROCK! |