*arches eyebrows* ...Interesting is a good word to use here. Well written, but for you that's par for the course. Obviously a FaytxNel, my favorite pairing. And I think the girl's name is supposed to be A-Meena, but then, I haven't played the game in a year, so I could be wrong.

This bears watching. I see some major potential here, and I'd like to see more of Greeton. (Damn the programmers for leaving that section out of the game!)

This sounds like an interesting story, and I look forward to future chapters. Keep up the good work.

It's hard to really comment on a fic this early on. I think you could do something with this, for what it's worth.