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| Wormtail96 2008-08-10 ch 11,  | abuseCongrats, StarReader86! I am very pleased with how this story turned out! You kept every character true to their personality and you also added in detailed explanations for what was happening in each chapter. Here was a couple of the original things I enjoyed in the last two chapters: -Eddy using a parody of Neil Armstrong's famous line. -Starfire and the PPG appearing at the climax to help the Eds. -Jessie using her pokemon to aid her in battle like she would all ways do out of parody. -Having Ed get all angry with the people in the shoe scene. -Having Eddy, who had become a nice emperor, still be a bit greedy like he all ways is. Again, great story. And I actually have an idea if you are interested. If not, that is perfectly all right. Oh, yeah, and when you get the time, can you please read my Horton Hears A Who fanfiction 'Freakshow'? I have been working on it for a little while now, and I would really like your opinion on it. Your good friend, Wormtail96 |
| Energy witch 2008-08-08 ch 9, | abuseWell that's the Eds alright...I agree real good description in the chapter. |
| Terranova210486 2008-08-08 ch 11, | abuseWonderful! Just wonderful. I'm just kinda sad that the fic is over. Oh, well. Good luck with your future fanfics! |
| Wormtail96 2008-07-09 ch 9, | abuseThank you for updating, StarReader. I am very impressed with your descriptive writing. I am glad Eddy has for once admitted he was wrong and has made up with Ed and Edd. Also, I liked the chase sequence and how you included Pickachu in this. Update soon. |
| Terranova210486 2008-07-08 ch 9, | abuseGood chapter-as always. |
| Lady Dragon010 2008-06-17 ch 8, | abuseYou better continue or else.( Gives death stare) This is tottaly asome so plessee continue(Now gives puppy eyes). (Aqua Girl) |
| Energy witch 2008-06-13 ch 8, | abusePoor Ed I feel bad for him. I actually don't blame Double D and Ed, Eddy was very cruel when he accused them. If it were me we'd be in a brawl or I'd slapped Eddy. |
| Terranova210486 2008-06-13 ch 8, | abusePoor Eddy! But I love Bender's cameo! Good job! |
| DarkMagicianmon 2008-06-01 ch 7, | abuseOh man those guys just barely made it out of that one |
| Terranova210486 2008-06-01 ch 7, | abuseGood job! Please update soon! |
| Energy witch 2008-05-31 ch 7, | abuseYep. That's Eddy alright selfish bratty and with too much pride... And you managed to put a reference to what Double D looks like real mad. Pretty shocked that he simply punched Eddy but if anyone remembers 'Tag Yer Ed' he doesn't have that much strength and is not experienced, one punch and it will not only hurt Eddy but also Double D cuase how painful it'll be for his knuckles. |
| Wormtail96 2008-05-31 ch 7, | abuseWell, I guess there might have actually be some good in Eddy after all. How about that? I liked the sissy-fight scene. So Ed, Edd 'n' Eddy. Update whenever you can. |
| Terranova210486 2008-05-25 ch 6, | abuseGood job! Please update soon. Also, if you like Double D, then check him out in my cartoon x-over Dan Helsing! PS. I'll try to do my "Road to El Dorado Avatar Style" fanfic soon. |
| DarkMagicianmon 2008-05-24 ch 6, | abuseGiving CPR to a chicken, that has got to be a sight that will blind you |
| Energy witch 2008-05-23 ch 6, | abuseLOL most of this chapter was funny i love the lines you gave the eds! |